THE MAGIC ISLE OF TIPPETI-TOO
A fable in three parts that recounts the visits of seven year old David with his two pets, Tod the Tortoise and Bleep the Canary, ..
This is great, I love the way you use a child mermaid as the subject for this poem and you can feel her youthful exuberence. If you can find a way to remove the coded paragraphs breaks it would be great, they are the only things that distract from it.
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