A Bad Daze Day
by Mary Grace Patterson
Monday, June 15, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Many have up and down days. This has been kind of a mixed up one for me..
(I'm glad they don't happen very often)
An attempt at a small bit of Irish humor......
Some times things just don't go right,
whether its day or dark of night
My thoughts come and go,
I try hard not to let this show
My memorys in a fog,
Darn it, i forgot to walk the dog
Could it be I'm getting old, or
is Alzheimers starting to take hold
I'm going to start making a list
of things I've got to do
I'll put one here, put one there,
perhaps I'll even make A spare
I sure don't wanta loose,
the list of things I gotta do
Most of the time,I pride myself
with a memory pretty true ,
Now and then days like this
come along, when everything,
seems to go all wrong
'Tomorrow is another day"
so Vivian Leigh used to say
I'll go to bed and get some rest
I'm glad I got these feelings ,
off my chest!
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|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|WHAT A GREAT WRITE OF WHAT SOUNDS TO ME LIKE A 'VICTORIOUS' DAY. FILLED WITH THE LOVELY PHRASES, IMAGERY AND RHYME THAT 'HIS' GIFT OF POETRY PRODUCES. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Very funny....I really enjoyed it. If it's any consolation, I have these days all the time. giggle...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You chose a good way to release and share your feelings, MaryGrace. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Cute poem. I've been making list for years. Not only do they help me remember, but they keep me on task so I get more things accomplished. And yes, we all have those bad "daze".|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|very clever little write! i loved it!|
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|Sometimes we sleep a whole lot better with things off our chest. Enjoyed, MaryGrace|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Hi Mary, Yep, we've all been there. I make lists, then I forget the list! Sometimes don't even remember where I put it... thank you for this bit of humor on one of those irksome days.... :)
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Vivian was right and you remembered. How great is that? I'm sure your dog will forgive you, especially for a belly rub. Keep fighting. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|We all have those days, MaryGrace; you certainly aren't alone! Know you are ever in my prayers and thoughts!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
You display lovely touch here, gently self-mocking and witty and beneath the surface very real and accurate as only experience can know; love the Vivian Leigh reference and love the whole poem.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Great write Mary Grace. Fight that thing. I, for one, know you can beat it. Trust in God and pray, read, learn, go back to school if you think it will help. Anything to keep exercising that brain. ;-) You will be in my prayers each day, my friend. God bless.
Oh, and by the way, package has arrived safe and sound. Give me some time to get started on it though. I am buried up to my ears in stuff just now.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Enjoyed this very much my friend, we all have those days, I make lists often as with so much on my mind...I tend to forget some of the more minor tasks at hand, often a stop in the afternoons after work, maybe a load of laundry...but nevertheless I love my lists, always been a list maker. A great write enjoyed it much!
Blessings from Ky.