A teardrop Fell on a Rose
by Rose M Rideout
Monday, June 22, 2009
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A Teardrop Fell on A Rose
June 22, 2009
Written by: Rose Marie Rideout
All night long I thought of your arms,
Holding me all through the night.
Praying that you’d soon come home
Telling me all would be right.
I held a picture of you in my mind,
One of you holding me,
Then I felt a teardrop fall on a Rose,
A Rose that you once gave to me.
I could hear your gentle whisper,
As you said those words I long to hear.
I’ll love you forever more,
Always know darling I’ll care.
I opened my eyes, but you were gone,
No where were you for me to see.
Then another teardrop fell on a Rose,
A Rose that you once gave to me.
I miss you, and I’m so lonely,
Since you have left and gone away,
I try to keep myself busy,
But the tears come everyday.
I rest on your pillow, I kiss you goodnight,
The pillow where you once lay your head.
Then I felt a teardrop fall on the Rose,
As I cried for your arms to hold me in our bed.
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|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|THIS WRITE IS FILLED WITH THE EMOTION OF ONE DEARLY MISSING A SIGNIFICANT OTHER...ONLY TRUE LOVE COULD PRODUCE SUCH LOVELY PHRASES, IMAGERY AND RHYME. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Very emotional write, Rose. Loved it!
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Rose, your words touched me... Really touched me. Nothing is lonelier than nighttime when ones arms ache to feel the warmth of a loved one.
How cathartic the ability to put one's feelings into words that, in some small way, help remove the pain of loneliness.
Your words did touch me, Rose.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|So beautifully written my friend, you've touched me deeply with this one, boasts of the love and special connection that you share with your beloved. A very romantic, gentle, passionate and well written write, loved it!
Blessings from Ky.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Ah! Such love! This is the stuff of dreams, Rose. Thank you for sharing yours with us - we are blessed to even read of it. You are greatly blessed to LIVE it! Just think how wonderful when the dream returns to normal reality! Hang on in there... absence makes the heart grow fonder and stronger, were that possible in this instance! You are a very lucky couple and we bask in your sense of love and longing. xx|
|Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)
|Makes a person wanna cry reading this poem.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|This is so lovely.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|so sad! beautifully written|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis
|Beautiful write sis, so tender,loving and wanting. This certainly speaks "love." You will be in Nova Scotia very soon with your sweet man.
Love you sis,
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|...long nights missing the one you love,,very beautiful Rose!
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|You have such trust & loyalty of a spoken heart's love within your endearing poem & as far as I know Yellow Roses represent Trust & Loyalty (may be differnt in this new millenium)
Much Love & Contininued Inspirations
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|We will never say, "a rose is a rose is a rose" because if she has been blessed with a tear provoked by absence, then, "a rose isn't a rose" it is a flower waiting to be picked up and tenderly kissed.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Sweet and lovely Rose, as you miss your man
while he's away, you know he feels the same
Love and hugs,
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very sad yet beautiful write, Rose.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|And a teardrop fell from my eye, Rose, reading your beautiful and moving poem ... the longing for the one you love is so keenly felt. Such a gorgeous, albeit heartbreaking, piece ~ beautiful ~ Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Full of tenderness and longing, and the last four lines truly beautiful.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Heartfelt, Rose; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Misty Graves Thomason
|that is so sad. nice imagery. good write|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very beautiful as only the sweet agony from being parted from someone you love can be. Soon Rose, soon...