|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Absolutely splendid poetry Karen! I needed to read this poem today!
Thank you for sharing and caring. Please tell Robert Fantastic picture!
May the Lord continue to bless you both!
|Reviewed by Joyce White
|Love this. Joyce|
|Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)
|Reviewed by FRANK UNDERWRITTEN
|Simple cadences and sonorous sentences adrift in vivid imagery... adroit co-mingling of enduring features of the sea with the ephemeral touch at the end, intriguing juxtapositions and sensitive handling of a sensitive subject. Wonderfully wrought.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|YOUR IMAGERY IS JUST WONDERFUL...WITH GREAT PHRASES AND RHYME, YOU PAINT AN AWESOME PICTURE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Dixie Dawn Michelle
|What a beautiful walk, its lovely just lovely. And I adore the title!|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|I enjoyed walking with you . I could see all that was happening with the great viusals you wrote about!...M|
|Reviewed by Rojob Khan
|i like it very much, check my new one's, please give me some feedback.Raj Abraham|
|Reviewed by Susan Smith
|You transported me to another world and experience, which is so fleeting: "Leaving a trail of footprints behind,
vanishing with each pristine, circling pool."
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Hi Karen,one of the joys of coming to the den is reading your wonderful and beautiful poems :-).They are just heavenly to read and it always makes me feel good.Take care Karen.
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|"Best time of all is late afternoon,
when pelicans and dolphins make their rounds.
An ancient performance repeated many times,
each exposed magical step, wealth abounds."
SUCH beautiful imagery in this poem, I really really love it. Nature and animals/sea animals, etc, are some of my favorite things to read about, and this is a top quality poem. Blessings, Michelle
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Thanks for taking me on your stroll! You always bring the sights and sounds alive with your poetry.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Susan Beck
|Beautiful imagery, wonderful use of language... I could almost feel the salt mist on my face. Makes me crave the salt air of the gulf :)|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Yes, Karen, and it does not matter the shore, east or west, north or south...the sea is still the sea everywhere one goes...ed|
|Reviewed by Christine Boyce
|I like your circling refrain-the beginning coming back to be the end.
And that is some refreshing imagery to go with your very beautiful picture.
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|A reveling in glorious nature and also a hint of sadness for the future-like those footprints which disappear with the incoming tide?
Beautifully written, Karen...
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|super nice verse Karen and a joy to read, cheers|
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Envious poetry. . . .
Strolling on the beach
I'll never forget that first school of dolphins I met.
|Reviewed by kg cummings
|I love living by the sea and seeing the animals in their natural habitat. Your poem paints a lovely picture. Your friend, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|ah...love dolphins...your poem comes alive with such peace and beauty.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Karen, Your beautiful poem takes me to this lovely place of inspiration! Wonderful Poem! Exquisite Visuals!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Sustained, well conceived images and fine choice of language make this poem a joy to read, a celebration of the natural as we so often see and delight in in your work.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|You definately got my love of the sea and shore stirred Karen and I love the repitition of the last verse. the ocean and the sea always lure my sea going spirit.
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|ABSOLUTLY BREATH TAKING KAREN, LOVE HOLLY|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|A Beautiful Day To Take Stroll,.e. My Average Stroll Is Round Building..
Most People Just Don't Know How Lucky They Are Karen...
Enlightening---Keep Em Comen...
Your Friend TRASK...
|Reviewed by Donelle Knudsen
|Karen, this poem spirited me away from a busy day in front of the computer. Thank you for these beautiful sights and "sounds". All the Best, Donelle|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Magnificent Karen! I love the mood it generates, the pic is beautiful
and your descriptions, superb!
|Reviewed by Alan Cook
|Nice poem. If I'm not mistaken, the picture is of the Palos Verdes Peninsula. I live in Palos Verdes. My house is just to the left of the picture.|
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Great write, Lady J|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Beautiful, beautiful imagery, Karen.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Truly magnificent imagery, Karen; you took me along as you described the scene! Very well penned; brava!
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A lovely poem; especially like the last stanza.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Beautiful Karen. I coujld vividly see all the things you described. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I like how you're able to give a new and fresh perspective of the ocean; a place you love and write about often. This poem relaxes the reader. The best part about the ocean is that if we build on its edge, it will take back what belonged to it. Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Not my Mallorca beachs, but you have described it well...although, there aren't no pelicans but decorating car's roofs seagulls!