|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|...the essence is more than an affirmation that size matters not... much more than a study in contrasts... the essence is in transcendence, in rising above and beyond constraint, beyond forces of oppression symbolized by darkness, beyond illumination symbolized by light... it is only from experience of great depth that we may ascend to the heights of rare visions such as the one you have shared with us here, dear Joyce...
Blessings of peace be yours now and forever,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A luscious, revealing glimpse of light that enfolds and enwraps the reader in hope ~ what a nurturing poem!
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|It is beautiful (THE LIGHT)and it is always there with HIS love....your beautiful words ALWAYS touch my heart so kindly.|
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|"It matters not the size of it for to her it's a splash of opulence bright, tearing through the facade of eternal night!" This sentence alone is a gem. Did you write this poem about me? Just kidding. ;-)
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|Very, well, written and expressed. This one made my eyes open wider and wider towards the end. Great writing!|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! POWERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Profoundly powerful write! ministering to the spirit within, who have been travelling so long with out a ray of light! Joyce I can identify, and these words are bathing me in His Love today. Thank you for sharing and caring!
Love And Prayers
|Reviewed by steve Chering
|THIS IS ONE GREAT WRITE...DONE WELL WITH THE PHRASES, IMAGERY, RHYME AND RHYTHM ALL RUNNING TOGETHER SMOOTHLY, ENJOYED.
"and caps off please lol
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Very well penned Joyce. blessings, J'nia|
|Reviewed by Barbara Sue
Really enjoyed this post..Sometimes that is all it takes to keep one going..even just a flicker of light can let one know they are not alone and to keep going..
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|It is very symbolic how you have chosen your words to express your ideas. I love how you repeated the word light to reinforce your passion for healing of whatever this transgression is. I could feel hope by the end of your poem. Lovely work Joyce, thank you for sharing.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Well Penned and Profound work
it makes feel great the other writers here
are discovering your wondreful writing talent
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|the tender light of beauteous faith flickering the eternality of hope
Beautiful Poetic Expression...
Love & Inspirations
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Joyce, how true what you are saying here. Light will not come when you are looking for it. It is only accessible when someone naturally squints. There is a chance that the light appears. Well done my friend, God bless you, Love Emile|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Good to have a strong faith in something, that yours shows of the Lord Jesus Christ...ed|
|Reviewed by Z McClure
|Very profound and powerful and moving...a poem that places the spotlight right where it belongs! On God! The Lord Jesus Christ!
The world's only HOPE. Seems annoited
~ a fellow human & poet
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Oh, the joy of Light revealed! A striking portrayal of the journey of hope, from darkness to light.
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Sometimes God is there and we don't always realize it ,but if we turrn our lives and hearts over to his tender care, his light shines in our lives. Great poem and sharing..M|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
I've just read your bio and this poem reflects what you said about your life. You searched and you found--even though the path continues. Having and keeping God in your life is an on-going journey and you've captured that thought very well.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
Your work clearly reflects your faith.
And that light can come in many varied and different forms too, depending on the situation. But for me, dear Joyce, the most important light in my life is the Christ that created me and sustains me and gives me a future in Him. Well done!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|So very uplifting... there is light at the end of the tunnel...
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|So much the paths politics have taken into the dark for so long. Let always be a light of hope in all things. Very uplifting write.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|There is light at the end of the tunnel ... wonderful imagery and faith abound in this piece. God bless, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|Amen to this marvelous write, in Him, Holly|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|AMEN! Joyce, in the heart we sense his warm expressions and guidance!
The imagery in your poem, I felt myself walking on those dimlit tracks, not sure where the journey was leading...
His light is oh so bright and a beacon into a BETTER Life ahead!
Warmest Blessings, Purple Lady Passion, SHEExooo
You/He inspire greatly! I feel your/his essence!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Joyce, this splendid poem uplifts the soul
and stirs the spirit! beautifully written!
|Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
|This is so beautiful Joyce. Your words are wonderful. Thank you.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Amazing poetry from agonizing darkness to a spark of light...the light of life. Beautiful!
Blessings and love,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The light in your verses is powerfully symbolic and meaningul. Thank you for sharing, Joyce. Love and blessings,