|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|This is so beautiful! It made me cry, and remember good times past, growing and learning and loved ones lost. Fond Memories are one of the joys of life.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my...very beautiful indeed sweet lady..have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss|
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|Absolutely beautiful! Holly|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Truly filled to the brim; this is exquisite.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Totally fabulous... I can only gaze whistfully on. This is my kinda Katy-did. Really taken with your sister's secret notebook... and even perhaps a little saddened by a more sinister edge to the finale, if not deeply tragic... I hope I'm wrong. But I pick this up in your choice of words in the first line, too. If not, this is doubly potent and poignant. Whatever, Linda, this is classy writing. Rich and wondrous for certain sure. xx|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|this is a keeper love the sweet nostalgia|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|A very sweet trip down memory lane, Lin. The craftsmanship of your words is wonderful. Great job!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|A masterful pen, Lin, very, very good work.
It captures youth.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I love nostalgic writes, and this is a grand one; and I really miss those 'good old days.'|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Wonderfully written, Lin. Though in a different place at a different time, I remember backyard "kick the can" and "higher than the ground" and "it". I remember hidden childhood kisses and the first touch of a girl's breast in the basement.
Thank's for the memories, Lin.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Oh so sweet to see into the past of "Memoir" so truly beautiful Lin!
I Love The Photo Too!
Peace & Inspirations
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Wonderfully sad, a tragedy in those childhood days. Gripped me like the shock of the first dip in spring waters.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wiping teardrops from the corner of my eyes, this one triggered a floodgate of my own childhood memories to play before me. Yes I remember those days at the lake, and Nesbit Orange pop, and the first flirting and kissing of girls when a few mouthfuls of any kind of alcohol would automatically make us drunk but me thinks we were more drunk on youth and life. Thank you for the shared memories...
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Old times are better than new times, because now the sadness are enhanced everyday by everyday tragedies and hardship while old times memories have innocence and always happy endings...
|Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary
|Another magical memory, Lin! Very very nice!|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|YOUR PHRASES AND IMAGERY PULLED THIS READER INTO YOUR STORY AND THEN FED WE WONDERFULLY. I ENJOYED THIS REALLY WELL WRITTEN WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE|
|Reviewed by Carol Grace
|I love it, Linda. The words you have chosen are so right, and the imagery so colorful that I became immersed in the beauty and the sadness. Great, great job.
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|What a gift you have. Gene is right on the button! The photo brings back a memory at my grandpa's cabin. What fun. Never drank Lucky out of a can but I remember the 11.5oz bottles and the puzzle under the cap. Follow Gene's advice this is really good. Patrick|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I must say I envy you Lin for this exceptional poem! so exquisitely remembered,the imagery is splendid!I have similar memories,and wish I could share them like this!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Sounds a time I could have as well enjoyed...ah for past pleasures, they seem to scintillate more than present ones...ed|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|It does seem like those times are from another world, Linda. You have evoked the memories and the aura of those days of youth most effectively via your verses here. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Linda, Linda, Linda! Absolutely marvelous. Cries to be published.
You take me back to those innocent uninhibited days...
swinging on a hemp rope
worn smooth by childhood
falling into cool laughter
Thank you for this. -gene.