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Natural Disaster
by Edwin Hurdle

Monday, July 27, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Warning,Warning,there's a storm on the horizon
Warning,warning,its coming to you
Warning,warning,you better beware
Warning,warning,get out of the way
Warning,warning,the eye of the storm
Warning,warning,is my happiness
I'm a natural disaster,strong and focused
A natural disaster,determine to succeed
I'm a natural disaster,you can't hold me back
A natural disaster,I will blow you away
A positive force to be reckon with
I come in waves of motivation
I will tear apart obstacles.
The only casuality is negativity
Out of my life,out of my sight
I'm a natural disaster,strong and focused
A natural disaster,determine to succeed
I'm a natural disaster,you can't hold me back
A natural disaster,I will blow you away
Bad words,bad thoughts are no more
Broken up into pieces that can't be repaired
My life is free with goals in mind
If negativity comes near my dreams again,
I will be ready to decimate it every time
I'm a natural disaster,strong and focused
A natural disaster,determine to succeed
I'm a natural disaster,you can't hold me back
A natural disaster,I will blow you away

Copyright(c)2009 Edwin Hurdle

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Reviewed by John Domino 1/22/2010
Magnificant poetry! Amen to that!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/4/2010
Impactful write, Edwin. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Inspire Hope 10/5/2009
Oh Edwin what powerful inspiration! A force to reckon with! "I'm a natural disaster, you can't hold me back
A natural disaster, I will blow you away
Bad words, bad thoughts are no more
Broken up into pieces that can't be repaired
my life is free with goals in mind."

Edwin I am in my corner of the den cheering for you!
oh how these powerful words ministered to my spirit
from within! What a beautiful gift you have, may the Lord
ever bless you!!!

Love And Prayers
Reviewed by Richard Arrington 8/23/2009
Very well done!
Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman 8/23/2009
Edwin, I admire your fortitude and strength of character. Never allow anyone to shatter your dreams!
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 8/19/2009
Very strong and positive write. Go for it.
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 8/15/2009
The forces of nature are well defined in this strong write. I like the way you have incorporated them into your thoughs and feelings...M
Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/4/2009
a powerful force that aims to dispel negativity at any cost -- nothing could be more motivating than to dispel every iota of negativity Edwin -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 8/4/2009
I loved your personification of a natural disaster ... so threatening and frightening...comes through perfectly! ~ Elizabeth :)
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 8/4/2009
Interesting write--from the mouth of the storm--and yes, people had better beware, Those storms don't always give second chances.
Reviewed by Barbara Henry 8/4/2009
What a phenomenal poem! It is a positive force with which many can relate.
I thank you so much for sharing this with your friends here at The Den.
To your continued success/
Barbara Henry
Reviewed by Lora Goodnight 8/3/2009
I love the theme of this one. My only suggestion was to read it out loud to your self. The word "focus" feels better as "focused". It is only a suggestion and I would not presume to correct your work only to help you in development. I have found that others reading my work and giving me little snipits of advice has greatly improved my quality of work. Please, only take my advice if it is useful to you. Otherwise the poem is very good. I just found as I read it I was thinking "focused" and thought it might help the flow.

Peace to your heart,
Reviewed by Michael Jones 8/1/2009
Sounds asthough your life is on track and nothing can stop its success! God bless you Edwin. Keep on trucking. Peace!!!
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 7/28/2009
wtg...I feel the power in this in attitude and soul!
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 7/27/2009
Well I would welcome the Natural disaster anytime. Great poetry, with a beautiful message.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 7/27/2009
It sounds like you are in complete that is the only way to be. Well done

Reviewed by Rose Rideout 7/27/2009
Sounds GREAT to me Edwin, if everyone thought like you we would all be much stronger and we would all succeed in what we want in life. I really enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 7/27/2009
Bravisimo!! PMA!! Positive Mental Attitude!
Love This Edwin...forceful & determined
Peace & Blessing!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/27/2009
"...the only casualty is negativity..." if one are in the optimists world, because everything else will go out of the window after Fortune leaves the house!
Great writing, not a natural disaster! LOL


Reviewed by George Carroll 7/27/2009
Free of negativity we can assault the highest mountains.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/27/2009
Well looks like you are riding the wave of confidence and hope into the oceans of tomorrow...great write.

Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/27/2009
Powerfully written, Edwin. Stay focused and positive always.
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