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Hello? What?
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Sunday, August 02, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Hello? Did I sin? Did I paint
A picture you didn’t like?
I tend to do that, alot.

What? You’ve sinned Yourself? Did
You word a wounded picture? I
Seem to do that, alot.

Hello? Did I see you? Did I
Number you, couldn’t sow me?
I’m not, anymore.

A seed sower/lover/gather/other

What? Didn’t you hear me? Did
You miss me? And, billions, like
Seeming to do alot?

Hello! Didn’t I tell you you rock,
Memorized by mistake, not me. I
Keep not remembering, anymore.

A single name, game, fame, same…

What?

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/2/09
 

 

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Reviewed by richard cederberg 8/6/2009
Hi Erin,
You've captured a kind of
neuroticism here pretty damn good
richard
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 8/3/2009
Say what? I wish I had the answers. Wish I understood
the questions. Oh hell, Erin, I love the poetry of it all.
-gene.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/3/2009
Queastions that reel the imagination and make us question the meaning and what our own answers to these questions are...which is great poetry to me.
hugs
fee
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/3/2009
Sounds like a failure to communicate - shouting to emptiness - what I thought of, reading these lines - could be wrong, you know. You never disappoint, Erin, in your effectively penned wonderment - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.



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