|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|life is an ongoing finishing school of sorts -- don't you think Felix? -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|I listen to the younger people and smile too. They have so much to learn and so much to live. Nice Fee. Love the pic too. Getting ready for Santa I see.|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|That last line "For the years only perfect us it’s true …" is so true. I think each of us are searching for that Holy Grail within us as we attempt to correct the problems in our path. (It's enlightning to be with younger folks and hear their view of the world around them.
|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|All too true. I feel sixteen half the time but I know I'm not. Still, enjoying each day. . . that's what matters! e|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|ahhh...so very truly said,life is a continuation...i was here today all in blues...and here your echo reminded me of my past memories,good,sour but all with plenty of hopes as earlier one of yours forever and a day did. Much Thanks.
I do hope I've not offended you in any way Fee,as your review for my one write just shows your name with no matter! ohhh..!!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|life continues on, all we can do is move along with it ... doing it over is never an option ... (maybe in the next lifetime ;)
good one, Felix ...
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Wise thoughts, never look back, never change a thing as it has all come together to make you the person you are today...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Yes, very true.|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Sounds like you had a fun day. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
|Yep! Can't number the times I've thought: "I used to say that..." with some amazement. I'm glad you wouldn't change anything--that makes for a basically happy you! Nice work and a good sharing. Love the pic.|
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|yes, the only thing that ever changes is the names, the places and faces. Thankyou for sharing this. ladyJ|
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Well done. I would have changed a few things but then, perhaps it is good that we cannot go back to change them. We'd change everything. Hugs, J'nia|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|We each walk our own path and own the choices we made along the way...really enjoyed this one Fee, and a cool photo
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Fee, what I would have done different? In retrospective maybe not a thing, but like Sinatra said "a few...but too few to mention"
When young, the world was a nasty bull and we had it by the horns, we were invincible and immortal, right?!
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|So very true Cuz, for the past is who we are today and we can't change just one thing. Another great write that you share with us. thank you.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|it would be nice to not have things in hindsight...but I have lots of things I would change...but wisdom comes from experience & openness of the heart into the soul of all matters....so thank you for blessing us with this circle of continuances Fee!
Peace, Love & Inspirations
|Reviewed by Richard Arrington
|Just like old wine, very good.|
|Reviewed by Gypsy Soul
|Hey Kat Man,
A Good Look'n Person Will Open YOUR Eye'z...
An Intelligent Person Will Open YOUR Mind...
But Only A Good Heart'd Person Will Open MY HEART...
Author 'n' One Of Tha Pack in OUR Den
In Essence I really need not say any more but I wuz gunna message You lata 2night any way'z so I'll try bust it down 'n' Kill 2 Bird'z with Tha 1 Stone.Mmm ! Well not only AM I have'n trouble with My Page . Tha Den az I dont know 'n' cant tell if I now have 2 Page'z unda 2 diff Jonh Henry'z Gypsy Soul 'n' Mizz Gypsy Soul ? ? ?
But I AM stuck with what 2 Post 1st Scribe'z from My Yesta Year,Scribe'z from My near past or Tha coupla newy'z Scribe'z ? ? ?
I AM also in question bout My recent Bio Re:Major Influence'z Post az it did say 2 hava Friend look ova 'n' read Your Bio 1st B4 post'n Umm ! I wuz in fact gunna send it 2 You 2 read 1st but didn't wunna botha You 'n' Umm ! Nobody I know haza clue that I can 'n' do indeed Write/Write Poetry let alone have My Own Page 'n' Tha few I have stupidly told Well a couple just dont Bloody 'n' neva will IT GET 'n' Unfortunately Tha rest have Insidiously Manipulated My Sensitive Side 'n' have also "Mistaken My Generosity 4 Stupidity" Hence Tha lata have been My Life'z work of recent az in Evict'n them from "Tha Twist'd Sista House" not 2B confused with Big Brotha Ha !
Yer ! Right I'm hear'n You say Kat Man."YOU Bust it down My White Arse Mizz Gypsy. Ha ! Ha ! Ha !
Nice ! ! ! Scribe
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|This is wonderful! And the wisdom expressed even more so!|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Rich in its living, each generation grows and comes to know what we have experienced in a different time and circumstance.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|this is really beautiful!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful write, Fee, and I love that piccy! Well done; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|...thinking back to, Remember when?...Great memories..Growing pains...'Life is a box of chocolates' eh? The photo is perfect to compliment your poem... :)
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Many "mature" folk don't appreciate being around younger folk...such a pity; as in your poem, Fee, it allows us to once again merge with our youth! I so enjoy your final two lines. But, hey...the rest ain't nuttin' to snivel at either :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|I love this Fee. The picture is great too (aren't you the cool one in your Hawaiian print shirt), and the last stanza shows your wisdom.