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| Reviewed by beta mpka (Reader) |
1/8/2012 |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/29/2009 |
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LIFE IS NOT FAIR...AND THAT IS A FACT BUT...GOD IS. AND...EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE...IT'S ALL RIGHT TO DRINK FROM THAT BOTTLE...IT MAKES ONE APPRECIATE 'TODAY' BUT...ONLY A SIP(SMILE). THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WELL WRITTEN WORK THAT IS APPRECIATED AND SO ENJOYED.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
8/22/2009 |
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Here speaks a man with experience from the ages; the sadness in the "bottle of Yesterdays" is naught for sipping, methinks. Beautiful written, Georg!!
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
8/20/2009 |
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WOWwwwwwwwww! I am floored!
YOU write stunning Georg!
YOU have entered my heart with your heartfelt verses!
To remain there forever!
I will keep this, SAD as it is, but a Melancholy feeling for ME!
It's your writing style I am truly amazed!!!!!!!!Thought provoking and Mind numbing!
WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Purple_Passion_Pulsing, SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
8/19/2009 |
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| I think this is one of your best poems. How could anyone with any life experience at all not be touched and challenged by this deeply philisophical and thought provoking write? |
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| Reviewed by Ankin Timourian |
8/18/2009 |
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Georg,
I am speachless, I want to say so much, but can't...very insightful and thought provoking poem.
I think you should throw away the bottle of Yesterday and get a new one, a bottle of Present Time...full of friendship,joy and pleasant surprises...
Love, Ankin |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
8/18/2009 |
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Your talented pen has written a masterful piece here, Georg...it makes me feel so sad, but it is a true keeper for me...
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/18/2009 |
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...such sadness that leaves a bad taste on palate indeed....moving Georg..masterfully written that tugs the heart strings.
Christine |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
8/18/2009 |
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An interesting gist in this
and the simile of Christ on
the cross being offered the sponge
soaked in vinegar touched me deeply
Superb Title Edvard
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/18/2009 |
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Georg, I sob as I read this poem. I so feel what you are saying here, I am trying so hard to find where my heart is...I feel lost in a land of strangers and insecure people who just don't get it. I fear that I may be slowing losing myself. I need to go somewhere that my heart can relearn how to love again.
I understand where this poem is coming from, I live this and I try really hard not to live in the past but it does come back to haunt you every now and again.
Much love to you dear friend,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
8/18/2009 |
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| well done, a keeper for sure, LadyJ |
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| Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard } |
8/18/2009 |
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Wonderful write Georg, I bow to greatness
Funny you should speak of no water, I have no water here today
I will have to change the pump I guess
All my yesterdays are pretty dry LOL
Have a great day
The Buzzard |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/18/2009 |
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Your wisdom saturates me when I read poems
like this that you write with such eloquence!
Thank you!
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| Reviewed by Dixie Dawn Michelle |
8/18/2009 |
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This is a neat picture of our human's condition. To comment on this poem would take probably one year with "A bottle of Yesterday" on the table to compare and to dare to say what one realy knows.
I like the read poems of this magnificence, for they challenge my creative inner mind. "A bottle of Yesterday" is an eternal lamp. Blessed be the author.
Most respectfully,
Dixie Dawn Michelle
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
8/18/2009 |
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| Very well penned once again Georg. Leaves me feeling a bit sad. Not everyone learns to play the cards they are dealt but those who do soon discover that even those who have the best of cards can waste them foolishly and end up being the losers. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
8/18/2009 |
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You on that Captain Morgans Rum again Georg? Of course in somewheres good water, or mothers milk is hard to find, or even cows milk for that matter, I would dare say, it's the same with love. You my friend have suffered a long dry spell and wandered many deserts full of bleached carcasses, but life can be like a pendulum, it's either all or nothing, and only a fraction of a second is it ever perfect.
I feel you'll be on the upswing from now on, you have felt the low.
Love! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
8/18/2009 |
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Georg,
Great poem about life.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/18/2009 |
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Wonderful writing, Georg; just superb! Well done; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :) |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
8/18/2009 |
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| Philosophical, yes....perhaps even a bit sad....and your last lines say much, but I believe that we need to always move ahead to enjoy what life we have left to live. Beautiful piece, Georg. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
8/18/2009 |
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| such a well written piece- |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
8/18/2009 |
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A wonderful write that says so much Georg. I believe you have made us all think back to that bottle of yesterday.Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
8/18/2009 |
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| VERY NICE, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/18/2009 |
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An amazing write my friend, reminds me of one of my favorite songs of the sixties....Time In A Bottle. Always loved that song and I love this current write of yours too Georg///well done.
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/18/2009 |
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| Somber philosophy from the ancient mariner. |
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