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Daddy by Patricia L Deter Tuesday, August 18, 2009 Rated "PG13" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
You took away my innocence in the blink of a eye.You kicked and beat me just to watch me cry. Did this fill you up? make you feel like a man? Is whats left of me stained your hand? Do my cries echo in your head? Do you wish me to be dead? Why should i carry this shame alone? When all of this occurred in our happy home.On my shoulders i carry this burden forever. Taking it with me on every en devour. You can deny it till the light in you dies. But when the sting of hell is an eternity of my cries.Remember it didn't have to be this way "DADDY"

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Reviewed by Felix Perry	8/19/2009

As a Daddy who loved his kids, I could never understand how men could abuse their children either physically or sexually and yes I think there is a speciaal place in hell reserved for them... fee




Reviewed by Lori Moore	8/18/2009

Your creativity has captured the sadness well.




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	8/18/2009

I can surely realate, understand the emotions only too well... Be always safe, Karen




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	8/18/2009

Wow. This is painful. I wish I could make it all better and healed. So honest and harsh, Patricia. I wish you all that is good. Regis