absence of you
by Patricia L Deter
Tuesday, August 18, 2009
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The absence of you is unbearable.
To never taste your words again.
To never feel you inside me and know what
To never know the happiness I felt in the
presence of your light.
Not to ever kiss your heart shaped lips.
There is this ache in me and a void that
cant be filled.
I am in this darkness, staring into a great
abyss of nothing.
Teetering on the edge of despair and
thinking of just jumping.
falling into the misery I feel in your
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|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I suppose it is the trial and error of life, but most of us can relate big time to this sad tale of woe. Keep writing about it, you will find that soon you will be writing about it and forgetting names, and important (for now) stuff.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I feel this completely. Believe me, I can relate, Patricia. Love and peace to you,