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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
8/28/2009 |
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| very expressive and sincere verse, I could feel the strength and faith in it as I read, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
8/26/2009 |
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I loved the way you ended this poem. Your poetry/poem brings Him into personal reach, but the ending of the poem was incredibly strong. They say that some of our strongest memories are influenced and induced by smells. As I read your last line memories of serenity and peaceful dew filled mornings filled my mind... times when I have wandered through the dew laden fields and meadows to find my soul... and I remembered those tender feelings of love I felt at that time--both Him for me, and me for Him.
Your poetry is powerful stuff!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
8/26/2009 |
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| I was just talking to a friend about this kind of poetry--poetry you know is personal, because you can feel the sincerity within it. You remind me again of how humanity is beyond merely being human. It reaches outside of one's self. And when you do that, with every sense, and in every sense, something within you recognizes His touch and pre"sense". Beautiful. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/25/2009 |
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Bernice,
Such a splendid inspiring poem you have penned. It is filled with a light that only can come from one source. Your love from within your heart. You are an amazing writer, never stop!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
8/25/2009 |
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| Yes, very beautiful indeed. God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
8/25/2009 |
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Beautiful, Bernice....it brings forth the pure pleasure of finding God in everything and experiencing His poured-out blessings.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/25/2009 |
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Bernice,
An enduring prayer.
John |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
8/25/2009 |
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Lovely,
Blessings to you Dear Bernice,
ann |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
8/25/2009 |
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I love it!
The more we open ourselves to God, the more we understand His presence in our lives.
Thanks for sharing this new insight.
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/25/2009 |
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He is all this and so much more! Very beautiful write, Bernice, and I love the piccy! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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