A SPECIAL Love - (an update)
by Paul D Berube
Wednesday, September 16, 2009
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An update of a love story I wrote nearly three years ago.
We met seven long years ago,
I didn't even know your name;
Back then, you didn't seem to care,
But I still loved you all the same.
You gazed at me with big brown eyes,
I could see that you felt unsure;
That day I promised to take you,
To a home where you'd feel secure.
Where have the past seven years gone?
During that time, we sure have grown;
Now, no matter where I may go,
You're there, you don't leave me alone.
But that's okay, you're one great friend,
Right or wrong, you have faith in me;
Day or night, you're there by my side,
Quite a pair we turned out to be.
When I'm asked how you got your name,
I say, you "brought love from the start;"
And that you've made my life complete,
With endless love from deep in your heart.
A love that comes from faith and trust,
Trusting each other in all we do;
A special love never questioned,
And Luv's what I came to call you.
You're by my side where ever I go,
You even come with me to school;
Right by my feet all during class,
My classmates think you're really cool.
You are my Luv, and you should know,
You've made a big difference to this man;
Greater than all celebrities,
And, my Luv, I'm your biggest fan.
A dog is a special creature,
Dogs are a gift from up above;
D O G is a reflection of G O D,
Like Christ, filled with unending love.
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|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|A VERY WELL WRITTEN WORK THAT IS 'BRIMMING' WITH THE LOVE BETWEEN A MAN AND HIS BEST FRIEND. ENJOYED AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING THIS TOUCHING WORK. BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Paul this poem is excellent! and so special causing me to reiminisce about my Thunder who is gone now. He was so loving and faithul, it is true Dogs are a gift from up above! Thank you for sharing this poem Paul #1
Love And Prayers
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Now that's love.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|So sweet and so true. I love this poem.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|This is beautiful, Paul, reminds me of a haiku I wrote a number of years ago:
Dog is man's best friend
D-o-g, when spelled backwards, is G-o-d
What better tribute?
Unconditional love, that is God's agape love and a faithful dog's, as well - excellent.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Aww, Paul, this is absolutely adoRAble! Very cute write; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
|This is quite inspirational, but watch the PIT BULL, a creature from hell, although I have met some well trained and loves ones. My CHINA is a great one (Chow/Lab).|