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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/10/2002 |
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| good poem... (continue) |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
9/10/2002 |
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word twisted around the message
enjoy life while you can...or something of that sort
great write |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
9/10/2002 |
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Great work Richard!
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
9/9/2002 |
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Alluring, Richard. I love this one! Just remember, the moon is a deceiver...beware.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
9/9/2002 |
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| this is just perfect! |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
9/9/2002 |
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I....oh...just love this, it's so beautiful and the words give a way to ...continue...oh, yes, 'as a cloud'
need to hold those 'golden whispers' of 'moon promises' close...it makes one hopeful...oh, what a simple beauty here, right from the heart... |
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| Reviewed by Madame X |
9/9/2002 |
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| I loved this. Simple and real. |
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
9/9/2002 |
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richard,
a naturepath's prayer--very good! |
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| Reviewed by Sailor Neptune |
9/9/2002 |
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Very good.
Neptune. |
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