|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|So well discerned. A poet's laureate bestowed.
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|I so agree... Beautiful poem, Eileen.
I loved the lines about spiritual embodiment and ignorance being a choice that can be changed.
Thought provoking write.
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|My fav lines Dear Eileen: "Wisdom, power bestowed not earned
Granted to changed hearts willing to learn
Hearts desire, craving fulfillment know how
Find it in the contemporary, here and now
Now is the time for the nations enlightenment
We must wisely seek Holy Spirit discernment."
Such truth here my friend. Love & Pace, Janet xx
|Reviewed by jude forese
|an enlightened lesson your magnificently express ...|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Beautifully done, Eileen. God bless.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
In other places and perhaps other attitudes and times yours would be a voice in the wilderness...a strong clear voice with something really worthwhile to say. Excellent!
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Amen! And hyperbole can take on many masks
and totally schmooze the foundationless dillweeds -
Kinda like the imperfect accusing the imperfect of being imperfect.
Incidentally chum, the day before the party, don't open the envelope Edvard is planning on sending you. i heard it may be Rohypnol. He may be planning on spiking your cocktail to take advantage of you.
Strange isn't it?
Rohypnol to get her in the mood
and Viagra to get him in the mood.
If I hear of any hanky-panky, or discourtesy,
I'm gonna havta kick some serious booty when i return.
Love Ritchie boy
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Such a beautiful, wise write, Eileen, well done! Nice seeing you again! You continue to be in my prayers -
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|For all who seek the ancient teaching,
Ignorance a choice that can be changed
And you teach us very well.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|More like a poem of meditation.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Excellent message in this, Eileen...well written.|
|Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
|Eileen this is wonderful!I loved it.
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Love the philosophy.|
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Eileen, This poem is not for everyone, only for "changed hearts willing to learn" and for the ones whose time will come. Love Emile
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|You studied this poem and its effect on the reader, Ellen / You took the measure of now and gave it a few twists / I am afraid the next to last line has already been written, and it is not as you would like it / Some day / Sooner than anyone can possibly imagine, America will find herself struggling to take the last, next breath of freedom.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Yes, see beyond the mass confusion and seek, grow and learn. Brilliant. Liz|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Great message in this, Eileen; well penned as usual!
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D