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DeFragmentation of Life
by Amber V Moonstone
Sunday, October 18, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Fragmentation: the disintegration, collapse, or breakdown of norms of thought, behavior, or social relationship.


DeFragmentation Of Life

by Amber "V" Moonstone

10/18/09

 

Ideal's images
broken promises
shards of past lives
Fragmentation of Life.

Twin souls
Mirrored images
enlightenment twofold,
Defragmentation of Life.

Windy breezes,
lighted pathways,
hearts beating as one
Beginning of new life.

Bountiful banquets,
passion's rapture,
souls entwined for eternity,
Life that will withstand.

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Reviewed by Roger Ochs
You've melded thoughtfulness with playfulness to bring more than the normal depth to the page. Bravo!
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Very, very clever and insightful. Hugs, J'nia
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Very clever ideas and images woven together seamlessly in delightful plainspeak, Amber. The short lines as statements certainly capture the raw energy, verve and momentum of such defragmentation swirling and congealing together. I especially like how you've inverted our expectation where de- usually means to detract, dismantle (whereas here obviously it is the opposite, as is consistent with the root word's meaning). And how the first two stanzas are mirrors of each other. A rapturous helter-skelter, exuberant and breathless, that instills a sense of invincibility. I like! :)) TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
You took us there! Standing ovation! This is what poetry is supposed to look like! Embryonic. Merged from the womb soulful poetry pouring from the slit, twin souls born into the Light, Amber...nourishing plenty of onward moments, you and he...

Love & Kindredness,
Sage
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
,,words to rebuild one's being...inspired by one whom radiates positive energy :)
Love,Christine
Reviewed by jude forese
beautifully inspired poem! when life is fragmented, hopefully it will come together by the winds of inspiration ...
Reviewed by JMS Bell
A PERFECT POEM THAT CHEERS 'LOVE'...LOVE THAT VEERS AWAY FROM THE 'NORM' OF HEARTBREAK BUT....THE 'IDEAL' OF EVERLASTING. EXCELLENT! THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Very unique and origianal and love the tail at the end of the word flow...trails off like into the mystic. Well done.
fee
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Love the message and the form too.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Souls entwined like comet's halos and that odd asteroid of broken promises colliding now and then head on, to remind us that our universe does hide secrets...

Georg

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
This title and poem suggest some very profound thinking. An interesting write.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
this is so true Viv...Nothing can divide the soul of love
the sustenance of love's strength truly is
inseparate & immeasurable
Peace & Inspiration
Vickie

Love The Curves :)
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Amber,how fantastic it would be! I hope it is real for you! Very artistic too!;-)
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Amber, this is so beautifully written.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
The rapture of two souls joined and each enlightening the other, simply magnificent...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
i agree-this is so much how i feel!
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
"Souls entwined for eternity." A description of "love", the true bonding agent of the universe, which transcends all lesser energies prone to chaos and break-up. Wonderful stuff!
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