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Quit Happens
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Saturday, October 24, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Especially when we've had enough.


Quit can glide in on a moon beam
jump one in a nightmare dream
come out the mouth in a loud scream
Phuck it
I quit
I'm not putting up with this chit
this is it
Do you understand what is coming
out of my mouth
or do I have to knock you down south

Quit can sit and fester
have one clowning like a jester
You can know you want to quit
but keep on ignoring it
until you can't take any more
then you finally hit the door

It can be a bad relationship or marriage
or a not so good job with high carriage
Some things aren't easy to give up
until they drive our brains almost corrupt
When it comes to stress in a mess
the end can come quite abrupt
Some even quit and go back
only to experience a worse attack
then have to dodge the same old flack

Hello oneway track

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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 10/24/2009
Great write. How many of us drop dead before we figure out we should have quit? I guess I should ask my boss. Patrick
Reviewed by Lori Moore 10/24/2009
Quit does happen and sometimes, it happens over and over again.
Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/24/2009
GOOD WRITE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
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Reviewed by Ed Matlack 10/24/2009
Quit seems to happen to me in the middle of the night...good subject matter, G...E
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