|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Oh, I'm a big fan of The Tudors. I just discovered the show a few weeks ago, so I bought the series. I'm in the middle of season two. I also think I was born in the wrong era...lol. I love your descriptions in this poem. One that sticks out is the curling spine. For me, that imagery jumps off the screen and reminds me of several scenes in the series. King Henry VIII seems to want to devour his women at times. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Where oh where have I been? Somewhere else when I should've been here. It seems in my time away you have graced the page with another masterpiece. This is truly remarkable writing dear Kate. What more could I add than what the others have already said except to say that I wish I'd written this! I sooo relate to the concept underlying this piece. My thoughts have run this path, but not nearly so eloquently.|
|Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary
|Magnificent! Your imagery is great.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|EXCELLENT WRITE WITH IMAGERY THAT LAUDS PASSION...BEAUTIFULLY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|I love this... lol.Belle... too funny
So unique, Kate, awesome pen!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Don't ever try to tell me what a demure little thing you are again!!|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
WOW! that's what I call picked to the bone. Always, paul.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
This Poem Rocks from early morn to High noon! I am enthralled with your mind!!! And Word-usage! You explore deeply in creative ways and it shows! As this floats in the air, is does so IN MY HEART!
Stay Safe and Happy!
Blessings!Love and Warm Hugs,SHECAT Purrs...
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|This seems to have a mind of its own... it rather floats along on its own air and then slides down that polished curve of a banister and ends...wavering in the air of its own fruition...
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|..one must be careful, you never know when a ghost will be lurking about...and an angry one,,yikes...great poem Kate, your work is immeasurable!|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|As Dawn wrote, your creativity with words is remarkable. I'm particularly receptive to the rhythm and energy and concision of the second and third stanzas.
I was thinking that it could be interesting to choose another century and... live there for a while, but then, who would you choose to be?
I guess that this "detail" is quite essential! ;)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|WOW! I think I was born in the wrong era, too, but I hang out in the deep, dark woods - far less frightening, there!|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Kate, I LOVE your use of words in this! You have one incredible imagination!|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Haunted houses from the author's dwelling we can guess, Tudors, Windsors et all, what an Halloween bunch!!!
|Reviewed by Charlie
|...of ghosts and skeletons, aHah! the ghost of boyfriends past...|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Now just what fun would it be to turn a lover into your own personal sex manchine? Oh, yeah, I see it now. Just let me keep the key. Patrick|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Wow, this is a step beyond with the upcoming hallowed saintsí dayÖreminiscent in short of the diary of an incubus.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|very creative and well written!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|great interplay of spirit and flesh as it dissolves, revolves and solves its desire for maddening dream-filled lips and ball-boned emotions ...|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Too cold in here to take a cold shower after this hot write...e|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|yes, this is the creative Kate Burnside - imagination in full bloom and verbiage at warp speed to please and tease the reader with perceptions new -- you have done this thing quite well Kate -- share with us as often as your pen and mind strike a deal -- while your "trembling frame pulses still warm and fast beating" -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|a soap opera of the royalty (I've never seen it) however I do enjoy your sensual inspiration from it :)|
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|scenting not merely arterial tides but inhabiting the circumference of this BIG-TOP () this is way DOWN_UNDER the fragility of weightlessness ~)pulsing(~ Ted|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Whew this one will get under your skin. Indeed. Well done, my dear Kate.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
This pulses and runs an electric current through the reader; superb word choice and combinations..."vacuum-packed, prime-pumped pipe-work..."..."...wet-pink...juice-stained..."
At your best here.
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Excellent write, Kate.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|this heats up from first line to a raging fire at that last few and I felt the curves of the spine and the heat of the skin in your descriptive narration...loved it..
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|I think they would make Halloween look tame. Excellent write.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Rich sumptuous Tudor Dynasty era fascinates me whenever I read or see anything about it. How can it not with a King like Henry VIII? Talk about the dark side...;-)Incredible poem,Kate,
the way you use words is a gift to your readers!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Hah! And the walls do not only tremble, they also talk / The Tudors, et al, could probably even shock this unshockable world of today / And as we speak of ghosts, maybe they will in due time, maybe they will . . . I still haven't quite gotten over Upstairs, Downstairs as far as that goes . . . And then there is Caligula, I have the uncut version . . . Happy shenanigans!!!!|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Are ghosts capable of sex? Holloween is brought to new heights in this poem.|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Sweet Kate, you always take us one step beyond where we thought we were going when reading your masterful words...and we love it!
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|well penned and enjoyed. ladyJ|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent writing, Kate; well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A classic Burnsidian write so well done as usual, Kate. I find your poem worthy of much more than a single reading. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
|Cor, excellent read! Hope you are well Kate xx|