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haiku poetry from untitled collection
by Mocha Sistah

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haiku #1 (no trust)

unbelievable things said
lingers near my heart
as I ignore unsaid feelings.

haiku #2 (crush)

feelings inside hearts
sing melodies like birds
who soar through the air gently.

haiku #3 (pained)

things inside fly
with a hard edge
cutting your heart instantly.

haiku #4 (patient)

calm and serene
his love soothes me
like the clear blue sea.

haiku #5 (serenity)

the master is
the only one who
knows the true beautiful me.

(c) 2002 Mocha Sistah
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from my untitled poetry collection
release date Spring 2003

These are first drafts but will be revised. Please give me your honest feedback. Much love and respect.

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Reviewed by Cles Wilson 9/13/2002
You go girl!!!
Reviewed by Karen 9/11/2002
I love it! It displays your own writing style. Who cares that it isn't your typical haiku poem. Using that technique would ruin it's whole essence. Excellent poem!!! Karen
Reviewed by Kaliannah Shirah 9/10/2002
Excellent :-)
Reviewed by Mocha Sistah 9/10/2002
Thanks much for your feedback. Actually, I am a non-traditional girl and love flipping the script (changing lanes) so that's why I didn't write about nature although I can. Thanks for the update....
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/10/2002
nice job, mocha!! god bless you, and keep on writing, girl!! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/10/2002
very nice haiku, mocha, but the pattern usually is 5 syllables first line, 7 the second, 5 the third. haiku are also usually about nature...if writing in haiku style, but poem not about nature, then it is senryu. hope this helps...i enjoyed these very much, however! can't wait to see your revisions. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

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