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A Duet
by Susan K. de Vegter

Saturday, November 14, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Come into my spirit,
energize my mind
look into my soul
two, but kind
likeness of the other
image of a man
heart of kindness
holding out the hand
fingertips that kiss
a touch connects
these two
eyes meet to greet
the other
these images of you
caught in breaths of reason
searching eyes of blue
holding hopes in check
for now
new friends, just us two
laughter of a lonely pair
merging two as one
hopes to smile that meet
to keep
see what can be done
wine to sate and smooth
the edge
needed to induce
easy gate ,let go
don't hedge
the process of these two
distance is the mistress
smiles to draw her in
passion the award
in time
meeting of two friends.
strangers in a lonely world
caught in eyes so true
blending one to each
a whole
two for one...
and you.

Susan K. de Vegter

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/13/2009
Two in a tango, the ever ever wonder of love.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester 11/17/2009
I really liked the way that you caught one thought that only spent a millisecond in the minds eye, and explained in wonderful verse.
I took more than a millisecond to read and digest it.
I doff me fedora and bow in recognition to the Lady writer's insight.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/16/2009
So beautiful, Susan, in image and verse - something timeless about your words. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 11/15/2009
Lovely message. I have a very good "girl" friend and everyone says that we are quite a duet! I just got back from the Keys with her, we had a fantastic time. I can feel the depth of your words in this poem, so good you have come back to the den. I surely did miss you and your amazing poetry.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Barry Yelton (Reader) 11/15/2009
Very well put together poem, Susan. I like the sentiment expressed and the poem's economy. Well done!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 11/15/2009
Nice arrangement is this cry for something more than friendship. Taking advantage of words over matter the feelings expressed are but the whispers of desire.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 11/15/2009
As always your poetry and thoughts run smooth and true and from all three parts of you...mind, heart and soul. Well done Susan.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 11/15/2009
Beautifully done, Susan.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/14/2009
Splendid poem of what two souls can mean to each other and for a better society!
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 11/14/2009
Beautiful Susan. The last stanza is a killer! Well done.
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 11/14/2009
The start of a love, so simply, yet, eloquently stated. Reminds me of when I met my husband - who is now my other half. The half that makes me whole.

God bless you. Kathy

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