by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, November 15, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Regardless some feel that they are more superior, they'll never admit their error. And please don't ask them to look into the mirror.
No need to look into the mirror
just accept the God given error
Then go ahead and feel superior
knowing that you fall from grace
either wear a smile or a frown
on your face
and at times suffer
shame and desgrace
in this far from perfect crazy place
To be honest man needs a
to help dig him out of his own
cause he's always on lucifers level
Give a man a brain
his other parts will never refrain
they'll always be trying to gain
Please don't say abstain
unless you want to suffer some pain
Man will beg borrow and steal
at times wound and kill
Some evil ones will do it
just for the thrill
No need to plant a seed
Our evil is a home grown breed
which many fail to classify or read
and some will definitely not heed
until they'er forced to concede
or the body starts to painfully bleed
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|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Good one, Gem. In my philosophical moments I tend to bypass the mirror and direct my attention to your always enlightened words.
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
A great reminder that we are not perfect.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|I know a few people like this. Sad! Well done, Grady; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I appreciate the philosophical perspective that you share within your verses here, Grady. Thank you. Love and peace to you,