Passionate Drops Of Cosmic Energy
by Amber V Moonstone
Monday, November 16, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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A dream that has awakened me into this poem.
Passionate Drops Of Cosmic Energy
by Amber "V" Moonstone
you visit my dreams,
awakening my soul to greater heights,
destined to be fused with your soul,
upon this starlit night.
Asleep I dream of your touch,
knowing your energy signature
visiting me as I sleep among
angels and spirit guides.
Where safety is always found.
When I awake,
you are there,
standing over me,
as if we have known each other
and we are within a heartbeat
Angels awake and stand between our hearts,
they know one of us is not ready,
to walk that mile toward freedom.
erupts and Spirit guides
glide into full armor protection.
They will not allow our passion to consume us,
only a steady flow of fire is permitted.
Nothing can hold back the needs and desires,
that are developing within our souls,
Only we can nurture and cultivate
the seeds that have been planted so long ago.
Tumbling into ecstasy,
could be very easy,
but the fall can be very difficult.
One that we do not wish to have.
Traveling toward another galaxy
with cosmic adulation of mind altering sequels.
Tapestry of a woven imprint of
each soul uniting as one,
blanketing the warmth of true love,
rendering each helpless within a heartbeat
knowing that there is no turning back.
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|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Viv...your beautiful heart sings of your energy!
These types of dreams are so prominent!
They embrace our soul…powerfully & tenderly
Your heart speaking so clearly about this love
I felt present watching the angels intervene the union
And hoping for the readiness to unite love’s souls
Peace, Love & Inspirations
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
This is so inspiring and spiritual. I always get a sense that you smile a lot when I read your work. Enjoyed this little journey. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|The spiraling effect of this leaves me breathless. Especially, "knowing that there is no turning back." When we achieve that knowledge, [I believe] love abounds and wraps itself around us.
Your ability to tell a story, create excitement and expectation, and through poetry - well, I applaud your talent!!!
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|It gets harder to take those passionate steps for fear of falling. The desires will always tempt us all so we walk that edge for love.
Very well taken steps and passionate tears fall all over the page.
Blessings and love,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|This is irridescent, Amber, with totality of purpose and multi-spectrum of being. I love how you describe the catalyst as being that of another, a vibrant soulmate who stimulates your own into a complete state of electric ionising, forging both your heart's desire and your own assurance of future and destiny. How wonderful if dreams can clarify so unequivocally these things to you! You have great faith and vision as to what's ahead and methinks it's not you who is hesitant. You are totally without fear and prepared to do whatever it takes. I admire both your certainty and courage - though you sound so assured that you make it seem as if, for you, it would not be a step into the unknown. And such wisdom in your words that "tumbling into ecstasy could be very easy, but the fall can be very difficult". Perhaps that's why so few are prepared to take that quantum leap, prepared to indulge - either because of fear of the fall, or a lack of faith as to where the fall will lead them. As you rightly say, from such there would be "no turning back". A complete feast for the mind and senses here! :)) The Keys have obviously invested you with a Golden One that potentially unlocks that Magic Gate! Wonderful stream of consciousness and flow of vital energies, as always. Bless you, Kate xx|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|beautifully impassioned cosmic dream ...|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|A word is a word is a word. But to weave them together like this takes a poet's heart.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|What a vision to wake to! I really liked the last stanza.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Beautiful! 'knowing that there is no turning back'
I love the title also, Amber... very nice.
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|What wonderful images and passion.
You dream well!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Your energy filled love and desires are explosive Amber, heartfelt beauty!
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Even though I'm not into 'New Age,' cosmic conciousness and all that, SOMETHING inspired these beautiful words - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Stars dust falling on my soul with every word she whispers from a dream...galaxies passing by, and then the velvet dark to enshroud the passion!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent write, Amber; well done! Love the piccy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|We explore as humans the world around us...some tempt fate and step outside the box to explore the onseen world around us. Well done Amber.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Passion cannot be denied in transition. Ascension of Passionate Drops of Cosmic Energy ascends on "indigenous tribes" that have already lived "there"...summoned by magic to align two glorious souls who are at home from the skys to the seas...Amber, this line pounds such force of coital energy...
"we are within a heartbeat