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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
12/6/2009 |
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So true. Many struggle and get nowhere. Only a few turn struggle into success. In my twenties, most single women I met were stone cold crazy. Only struggling housewives appealed, trying to get free from dull or abusive spouses.
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
12/2/2009 |
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| but what wisdom and strength we find in that struggle! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
12/1/2009 |
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| This so tight and yet elastic, Susan... what I mean is that it is agile and full of muscle! I can feel the stress and strain, yet also the strength and rebounding resiliance in your words. Another high-wire write which tells it like it is but yet remains athletically enthusiastic. Great sardonic humour, too.. at least, from where I'm sitting! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/1/2009 |
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I don't think anyone would disagree with you that life is indeed a struggle, Susan. I love the honest tone of your poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
12/1/2009 |
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Birds of a feather flocking together.
You need a man that loves you for being you!
The similarities are necessary to be sure.
But then differences, too, can be an asset
if there is real love and respect between both.
A wise heart wrote this.
one I have grown very fond of.
Blessings Belle-o-well-o-wonderful
r |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/1/2009 |
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Struggling is a way of life,
It's something you can depend upon
How so very true, for most of us. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/1/2009 |
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Struggle is my middle name! LOL Seriously, these past few years have been very hard on my twin sis and myself, and we don't see any thing getting better. Keep us both in your prayers; I will do the same for you! Well done; and love the piccy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/1/2009 |
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I too have struggled Susan but the way of life and the way of love is never easy. If we had no hard times or no broken hearts we would also have nothing to compare what the good times and being in love are truly like. As for the man with the wife...we don't always pick who we love our hearts do that for us...
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
12/1/2009 |
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| Makes sense to me, Susan. Been there, done that myself. Well written my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/1/2009 |
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I hear you, Susan ... been struggling all my life, too. :( And yet if I complain, I'm told to shut up, suck it in ...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
11/30/2009 |
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| As they say, most people live their lives in quiet desperation. So true your written words Susan, so very true. |
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| Reviewed by Eugene Williams |
11/30/2009 |
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| My Dear Friend life is a struggle but through the beauty your words bring your struggle will be short lived.. Happy Holidays |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
11/30/2009 |
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Life can't always be a bouquet of roses. There's always thorns along the way. What else can I say. . . . . I have a wonderful wife
that puts up with my Parkinson's in my life. I can relate to this poem. I just take one day at a time. Why paint when it just ain't.
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
11/30/2009 |
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Life is a struggle, just when you feel you have found your way, something else comes up to make you reach even higher and further.
Good one Susan,
Peace, love ,and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
11/30/2009 |
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| Never give up, just get wiser, Susan. I know this was tongue in cheek, still . . . There is much depth here . . . |
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