Made to Order
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, December 06, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I like my food well done, or I don't want none. This is my desire, so I thank the Lord for fire.
The United States of America
is made to order
maybe this is why the Mexican's
jump across the border
This world was made to order
the Garden of Eden was our starter
Too bad Adam couldn't have
Of course this earth
is mans place of birth
but man seems to fall short of
the creators worth
But I guess we're suppose to
be here living
God suppose to be a loving
None of us were given a choice
before the auto we had to
learn to ride a horse
This earth has a lot of things
that don't need importation
but there are quite a few that
we do not have an explanation
However man seems to be
right at home in every nation
At least until that final day of
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|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|You always seem to know how to bring homespun truth to life and this poem was a pleasure to read Grady.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|In While (God) May Have Created Heavens As Earth--
He (God) Did Not Create This Evil World We Live In...
Satan Devil,i.e. Man And His Never Ending Greed $$ Mongering Fate Did...
Keep em Comen...
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|interesting how we all live and exist where ever on theis earth we call home|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
the world is indeed a strange place. A lot of things to think about my friend.