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|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Rong Lee has a beautiful soul and a true understanding of life at such a young age. Very amazing young woman with a clear perception of the truth, God bless her....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|You rock Trask! Thanks for bringing us this beautiful poetry and unique outlook, as always. It's what's in the heart man, what's in the heart. All the best.|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|She was only 9 but she'll gone soon
When An where shes going God will know
She doesn't want sun to go
Don't you know that we care
Keep The Faith and hope is here
Deep In My Heart I ask myself
Do we really care
I read paper of colored boy
He was starving so were lone Vultures
Why so full of sorrow no tomorrow
There's rainbow will he ever know
Don't you know we pray
As disturbing as your past poetry, Trask. Is that what you want? Attention? Cars go zoom, boobs regress, feelings change, why transgress?
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen