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As In Do We Really Care
by - - - - - - - TRASK

Tuesday, December 08, 2009
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This Is Her Poem From My Favorite Asian Girl (Friend) In China On MySpace.Com...


12-08-09_

DO WE REALLY CARE...

I saw Picture of Small Girl
Crying and living in lost world
The men fight for dear God
She Don't care
Cause there ain't nothing to Share
I'd Watch T V about sick girl
She was only 9 but she'll gone soon
When An where shes going God will know
She doesn't want sun to go
Don't you know that we care
Keep The Faith and hope is here
Deep In My Heart I ask myself
Do we really care
I read paper of colored boy
He was starving so were lone Vultures
Why so full of sorrow no tomorrow
There's rainbow will he ever know
Don't you know we pray
For you to see light of day
For you to bring back the look of love
Words Of Wisdom Is not Enough...

Rong Lee... c 2008 ronglee...

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...This POEM Is REPRINT Of Rong Lees HER Only Poem SHE Has Ever WRITTEN...


Amazing She Is Real Chinese Girl From Shanghai,Shanghai, China...


Rong Lees ENGLISH Is Fluent Excellent Her Only Poem Is So Sad...

It Is Requisite That Chinese Children Are Taught ENGLISH Before Chinese Language In 1st Grade...

Rong Lee Has One Up On 90% USA Citizens (Humans) Who Think They Care(?)Really Only About (Yourself) Themselves!!

If You As(I TRASK Do Care)This F--ked
Up World Wouldn't Be In Trouble It Is In Sin!!

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PHOTO:

Check Out Her NO FEAR Of Anything SNAKE Wrapped Around Her Neck Back!

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ETAL:

Rong Lee Now Has Her Own Chinese Paint Store--She Sells Chinese Paintings...

Rong Lee Has Most Beautiful Big Slanted P Qed Eyes I've Ever Seen Which Makes Her So Beautiful Person...


Like Me TRASK, She Does Not Crack a SMILE That Makes Her Even More Beautiful!

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We Joked Only Way I'd Ever Make It Get To China To Get To Meet Her Is IF:

No Chance I'd Be Dropped Out Of UFO
...

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One Many Things We Have In Common:

{{{{{{ NO FEAR OF ANYTHING }}}}}}}}

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ME,TRASK "POETIC PROPHET" c 1979/2009 TRASK...

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HEY: Erin Kelly Moen...

If My Poetry Is So Disturbing Why Do You Even Comment? Really I Could Simply Tell You To DROP DEAD...

About Only Attention Getter Is Your Abstract Muddled Review...

Since You Re-Copied Rong Lee's Poem Obviously You Can't Read ENGLISH Either!

I'll Leave It As It Is Said N Done Dead...

As Most A D s Do I Won't Delete It...

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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 12/13/2009
Rong Lee has a beautiful soul and a true understanding of life at such a young age. Very amazing young woman with a clear perception of the truth, God bless her....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 12/9/2009
You rock Trask! Thanks for bringing us this beautiful poetry and unique outlook, as always. It's what's in the heart man, what's in the heart. All the best.
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 12/8/2009
She was only 9 but she'll gone soon
When An where shes going God will know
She doesn't want sun to go
Don't you know that we care
Keep The Faith and hope is here
Deep In My Heart I ask myself
Do we really care
I read paper of colored boy
He was starving so were lone Vultures
Why so full of sorrow no tomorrow
There's rainbow will he ever know
Don't you know we pray

As disturbing as your past poetry, Trask. Is that what you want? Attention? Cars go zoom, boobs regress, feelings change, why transgress?

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
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