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Asteral
by A PAX

Friday, December 18, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Asteral

As I close my eyes so tight, and let my spirit drift
I shed this earthly body, and all it holds herewith
I give my spirit to the winds, of life's cerebral plane
As I look back upon release, only my shell remains

Drifting through the cosmos, towards what has been before
Seeing clear past midnight skies, divine celestial tour
To a world, I've never touched with my earthy hands
Such a noble elegance, where only thoughts transcend

A kelioscope of colors, fanned across the sky
Glowing folds of rainbows, hues a vivid dye
Waters calm and peaceful, resting on cool shores
A heaven for a tired soul, where strength can be restored


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6/20/01


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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 12/28/2009
This is an awesome write, Anita. I am a fan to many writers in the Den, but you are one of few I feel writes most similar to me. This is one I wish I'd written:) Your talent shines here. Not a word out of place. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Jon Willey 12/22/2009
Anita, poetry to sate the soul with -- the words trouble, woe and conflict do not exist in the lexicon of your free drift in space -- very beautiful -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 12/20/2009
So wonderful to see you back with such an uplifting and inspiring write, Anita. Your beautiful lyric and visuals transport us to higher planes of body, mind and spirit and enable us not only to dream, but to SEE. Your art must be transcendent these days. Seasons greetings and love always, Kate xx
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/20/2009
Peaceful and serene--the best kind of poetry.

Ron
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/19/2009
It is wonderful that the human mind accompanied by heart and soul can take a trip like this whenever we really feel the urge just by closing our eyes.

fee
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 12/19/2009
i would love to be able to go to this place--seems that i am slways overly busy in my mind as well as body--i like this!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/18/2009
That is some wonderful journey, Anita. Thank you for sharing it via your verses. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 12/18/2009
This canvas is one of beauty and solace. The heavens have a spectacular way of creating for a true artist. This you are and I bow to your creativity.
Blessings and love,
Susan
Reviewed by richard cederberg 12/18/2009
ASTRAL indeed!
And " a kaleidoscope of colors, fanned across the sky"
is a lovely image. A special persuasion in this special write!
Hope all is well!
Happy Holidays Anita ...
richard
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/18/2009
Reminds me of the aurora borealis, Lady A - beautifully penned and illustrated. Well done.

(((HUGS))) love and Merry Christmas!, Karla.



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