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Groundhog, Dazed (Revisited and Revised)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, February 02, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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... Revisited, because, well, you know, it's Groundhog Day, and Revised, because ... well, think (HOPE) I made it better. LOL!

Feel sorry for poor ol' Punxsutawney Phil ... no wonder he's grouchy. I would be, too. =]

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman

All snug in his burrow, the Groundhog:  was
sound asleep until the !! BIG HAND !! of the
Inner Circle reached in and hoisted him up
into the artificial sun made by media spots ---

Tell us, O-Wise-and-Wonderful-Prognosticator
-of-all-things-mysterious:  D o  you see your
shadow?  Can you say if there will be six more
weeks of Winter? 
Fools --- believe what you 

want.  He won't divulge his secrets.  Poor thing
can't see past his own nose or need for rest ---
Spring will get here soon enough.  Always has.
You don't need a Groundhog to tell you that. ...

(c) 2008, Revised, 2010, Karla Dorman (2/2)

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Reviewed by Tom Hyland 2/3/2010

What we need for next year is - some ole Scandinavian Sniper 'Grouch' like ...

Georg EDvard to sneak in there the nite b4, swap ole Phil out, into a nice warm, soft-bedded pet carrier - and put a Bear-Trap in his burrow -

next am - they'd have a One-Handed Mayor in ole Punx !!!

So much then for 'Tradition!' Bear Hugs n' Warmth ... T-Kat.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 2/3/2010
LOL. poor thing. Well penned my friend and funny too. Hugs, J'nia
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 2/3/2010
This is a fun read, Karla. I like the no-nonsense wisdom. lol:)
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 2/3/2010
Cute one Karla and I am with Georg, there would be fingers missing, LOL

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 2/3/2010
If I was old Punx and anybody came to disturb my sleep on a cold February morning they would have been counting how many fingers left! (LOL)


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 2/2/2010
This is so cute, Karla....and as always, clever!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 2/2/2010
well written!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/2/2010
Yea I think it is going to be cold here forever or so my bones feel.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 2/2/2010
Funny, too funny. March 20th or 21st will be here when it gets here. lol. Liz
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 2/2/2010
Cute writing and creative as always...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 2/2/2010
Kewl poem Karla I enjoyed reading this
In Christs Love
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 2/2/2010
Stupidest thing I believe I have ever heard of, except for the blind-leading-the-blind Stupidcrats. I have never understand the allure . . .
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/2/2010
Poor Punxsutawny Phil: no wonder the poor furry guy is so grouchy! I would too if I had my nice, long winter nap rudely interrupted just because some people want to know if spring is on the way or not! Damn weather lore! LOL AdorABle poem; well done, Karla! (yes, I did use the D-word! LOL)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Now imagine ME if I had a nice, long nap like that and you woke me up. Oh, boy, the fur would FLY with the quickness! LOLOLOLOLOL
Reviewed by D Johnson 2/2/2010
With treatment like that... the folks in Pa. deserve 6 more months of winter.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 2/2/2010
Poor little ground hog. Maybe we'll see him at the Oscar's some year. He certainly deserves one. Flashy little designer outfit with a hot little bimbo in tow. Now that would be something. Cute poem.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 2/2/2010
Very Kewl Karla! Like this truth Poem! Spring will arrive and when it does, we will Treasure the sun and fun! Your poem had a cute Flow!
Stay Warm!
Stay Happy!
LOVE THE frozen and thawing PICTURE Above!
BLESSINGS Of Peace and Harmony, SOULFUL_PurplePaSsionsSHEEoxxo
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 2/2/2010
I love the snow so much but I'm about ready for some warm weather now. Poor ole groundhog gets blamed for it all!!
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