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People Think
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Sunday, February 07, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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People think then they do, some do before they think, others don't do either.

Negative rides the mind
it will rob some blind
unless there's some positive to find
Hopefully there will be a rewind
Very few go in search
however many sit in church
trying to find a patch
some come up with a match
others can't catch
One things for sure evil will dispatch
before good can unlease
good luck on finding peace

Some might scream oh Lord
I scrambled my drawing board
should I use love or a sword
Many have cut the cord
they get lost in evil word
until some sound positive is heard
Better judgement walks
because evil strongly talks
The devil he certainly stalks

The brain might become confused
because many have been abused
They say we are what we eat
what we think can compete
however no brain is complete
made of flesh aka meat
Everyone will eventually get caught
especially if they get lost in thought
We're as good as sold and bought
if no positive is sought

The devil cashes his check
as our lives unravel in wreck



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Reviewed by William Bonilla 2/8/2010
I always enjoy your work, Brady
it make great reading
and lets not get into the Rhyming,
I wish I could rhyme just like you...
Peace Brother

Reviewed by Jon Willey 2/8/2010
your last stanza is right on -- peace and love to you my friend -- JM
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 2/8/2010
true words!
Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe 2/8/2010
Yes. Very true. But we must all cross our abyss to become aware of a better way to live. aka learn from our mistakes. However, I read this interesting article the other day that free will is an illusion and now it's been scientifically prooved. We act before we think, and we are slaves to our inprint and the patterns we've been thought. So if that's true, I guess it all comes down to how well prepared that lump of grey matter is to strive towards peace of mind.

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