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|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|J. The Waves had me sitting at the edge of my seat good write felt many emotions|
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|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
As is, this is totally gripping, yet slightly wanting--the question begs in the area of whether the speaker knew the girl -- also a tangible metaphor for the color and/or nature of his fear contrasting with is inclination to save her are some possibilities. Thanks for the opportunity.
|Reviewed by Penny Hayes
|I think it needs a bit more, kinda leaves me hanging at the end, but I caught myself standing there, only I jumped in the water...|