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Athena Captured
by Felix LeRoy Perry
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As most of you know I seldom do haiku's. in fact had to ask a friend what the pattern was but...
this picture seemed to cry out to have a ku done with it so hope you like my feeble attempt at structured writing. Fee


 

Athena Captured

 

By: Fee

 

White rose tangled roots

Meteoric star of night

Trapped thy heart within…

 



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Reviewed by Sheila Roy
You make the picture even more interesting with that last line, Fee. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by D Johnson
Great little Ku... and picture to.

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Fee the photo is awe-inspiring!
and so are your words
Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)
You did a fine job!
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
That's not so fee-ble Fee. Well done. Interesting picture/painting. Hugs, J'nia
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Stunning work Fee in form and content.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Quite powerful in so few words.
Reviewed by jude forese
captures a ku perfectly, Felix ... well done ...
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Exquisite!!!! This is one of my favourite styles of poetry too...well done!

Anna
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Nice job Fee, welcome to my favorite style of poetry, next is Tanka

Carole~
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Not a feeble attempt as far as I am concerned, quite good and with real meaning, I think...e
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Absolutly beautiful Felix, you do a perfect job at anything you put your mind to.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
beautiful
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
So much in so little words, you did marvelous darlin! I am starting to write shorter poems to leave thoughts and interpretations to the reader...Interesting photo Fee, it suits your words very well!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Roses and flames and roots and feelings...you done it!

Georg

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
....those deep roots have the strength to capture and safekeep :)...Fee you never cease to amaze one...as this is breathtaking~as is the art~
Hugs,
Chrissie
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