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How Could You Hurt Me This Way?
by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Saturday, September 21, 2002

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How could you hurt me this way?
Why didn't you let your feelings convey?

Am I not good enough or pretty enough for you,
Or do you feel more comfortable with that Sue?

Is it because I am fat and not that good-looking?
Or is it because I am not into yoga or cooking?

I don't like to cook and forget about exercise;
I am not into body building or that jazzercise!!

Not everyone can look like a Hollywood starlet;
And I don't like you accusing me of being a harlot!!

I may not be what you want, but I have brains;
But how you hurt me, the pain still engrains.

You would rather be with Sue, that Barbie doll;
And this is something I DON'T like AT all!!

So, Ryan, I am here to tell you today....
GET OUT of my life, and just GO AWAY!!!!

You have hurt me for the very last time,
And on you, I wouldn't spend my last dime!!!

this poem is fictional; it is entirely concocted from my imagination!! i was just thinking about teens breaking up, and this was the poem that resulted from these thoughts!! (joel thought i was REALLY breaking up; i just wanted to clarify things!! :) )

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Reviewed by priya savkur 10/19/2002
good poem..... u really explain it all so well.... i loved it!
Reviewed by Dorian Petersen Potter 9/21/2002
Wonderful write sweety..loved it..Love and lots of hugs))))
Reviewed by Kacie Rahm 9/21/2002
Wow, you explain teen breakups so well!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/21/2002
You tell em baby!!!don't need that ...
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 9/21/2002
Hey Baby cheer up Honey. why all this hurtful feelings eh?

wow Karen you are a kind soul and I am glad you are my friend !!!

Have a good time Baby doll!!! and Stop hurting.

Love from India - Joel - your friend
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/21/2002
pain evident throughout...emotional, intense...great expression here, karen! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, karla. :)
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 9/21/2002
excelelnt write
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