Wheeling Free
by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, May 09, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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No guilt on my Mom's day.
Image courtesy a tire company and some poor butterfly. |
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I'll be wheeling free,
with only thoughts of thee,
some day.
Sailing the sea,
your hair windblown free,
one day.
Floating over a tree,
soon you and I are we,
to say,
We saw the shining star,
in the blackness of who we are,
to light our path for free.
We read the rights of man,
as far as the distance of ran,
because we can.
Yes, we can.
Because we're wheeling free,
no grease beneath our skids,
no egos, ifs, buts, or ids.
Free wheeling be we.
Copyright 2010 © Ronald W. Hull
5/8/10
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/4/2010 |
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Thank you for sharing this carefree and uplifting offering, Ron. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
5/10/2010 |
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| No guilt is good. Just be sure to check your tread depth.:-) Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/10/2010 |
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| Enjoyed much... |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/10/2010 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
5/9/2010 |
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Pretty nice poetic freedom... as usual, from the master of rhyme.
keep rolling, mike |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/9/2010 |
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| like the cool ease this poem flows through ... |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
5/9/2010 |
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Terrific rhyme in this very fine writing.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/9/2010 |
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| Keep rollin' on my friend, and yes that picture is me, after losing all the weight...taken just two weeks ago...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/9/2010 |
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| Ron, an uplifting carefree work with an easy going style -- may peace and love be always with you my friend -- Jon Michael |
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