A New Mother's Prayer
by Paul D Berube
Sunday, May 09, 2010
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A variation of a poem from my second book,
MOUNTAIN TRAILS, Lessons in Life, Book 2. I hope everyone has had a wonderful Mother's Day and may God bless.
I have a warm and loving heart,
And a most understanding mind;
Even a bit of humor too,
And all the patience one can find.
I know it's not an easy job,
But I believe I can do it;
Give me a chance and I'll show You,
I'm anxious to get right to it.
I promise to give it my all,
I'll shine like the stars up above;
I'll teach all the lessons I can,
I'll fill this new life with Your love.
Any woman can be a mother,
Even the ones who do kids harm;
But it takes someone very special,
To earn the respect to be called Mom.
I know as my child grows older,
There'll be much more for me to do;
Should I have more questions come then,
May I bring them all here to You?
Lord, will You do me one favor?
Guide me as I work at this task;
Correct me should I lose patience,
For now, that's all I need to ask.
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|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Yes beautiful indeed Paul and very profound...excellent work! May the Lord bless and strengthen you each new day! Thank you for sharing and caring!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful prayer, Paul; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by John Domino
|This is special! It shows that you have great insight of what it takes to be a good parent, especially a mom. Few men can see through their male pride. Paul, The Lord gave you great gifts and talents. Amen!|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Very good writing, Paul|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This is nice, Paul. As women, we all try to be best moms, but life is without a manual, we learn to be best as we and our children grow; and having faith in us will make us grow stronger and less likely to do the children harm.
Wonderful prayer and this is so unique writing!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Amen. May the Lord show us the right path. Great poem|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|A BEAUTIFUL PRAYER OF FAITH...TO HIM WHO IS THE PROVIDER OF ALL THAT IS NEEDED TO BE A GOOD MOTHER. AMEN! AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
|Paul this is SO good! I loved it!
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|A superb writing, Paul.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
|This poem is wonderful.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Happy Mother's day to all you good Mom's out there and thank you Paul for this splendid poem|