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A Universal Message
by jackelyn sune

Monday, May 31, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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i wrote this when i was younger, i was about 15 and yes, that's when lives change. but this change is a different situation for being there. but the reactions are known to all.

I screw up you screw up
he, she, we, they, they all screwed up
at some point in life
but what u see as bad I see as normal
what I see is weird you see is normal
evryone has a different view in life
on certain topics certain judgment
I don’t care what you do its your life
but I still care because its your life
and you care for mine
whether be mom, guardian, brother sister,
girlfriend, boyfriend (both I wont judge)
best friend no friend
the air, the sky, the ground, I don’t know anymore
I was sure until I told you now I worry
about now, next, later, later-later
a friendship between you & me with every little thing in between
you care I care we all care so just
trust me; I’m still the same person,
the one that lost her panties at your dance recital  
I’m the same but different… no not
really that different, that was me all along
you just didn’t want to hear it
or see it
you just tolerated it
like most of the world we just tolerate things
you know…
people, religion, views, opinions, sexual preferences
but no matter how “fine”
that certain person says they are about it
you know damn well they’re not
I know your not fine with it
But you still put on that kind of fake smile
And just tolerate me
And I don’t like that
As I listen to hotel California
I’m calm now
This was probably one of the best days of my morning
And you just tolerate it.

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Reviewed by Paul Judges 5/31/2010
Well written piece
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