|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|I LOVE YOUR LAST STANZA, FOR IT IS SO TRUE. A POET NEVER 'ATTAINS' BUT MERELY SOARS THE ENDLESS SKIES OF TRANSOFRMATION. THIS IS THE WORK OF AN AWESOME POETESS WHO ALWAYS BLESSES US WITH THE BEAUTIFUL ARTISTICAL GIFTS OF HER DESTINED JOURNEYS. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|As always...beauty personified in the depths of "passionata". The music is well chosen. Would love to find that mp3 somewhere.|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Belle, a different concept that I truly enjoyed my dear friend -- you are a creative woman -- may peace and love be always with you -- Jon Michel|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Beautiful as ever La Belle.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|You are a living work of art. Well said. J'nia|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|great rate, the sky is endless, seems i'm stuck on the ground though, can't seem to get away form life versing, I'd love to travel everywhere, but I guess we are what we pain, for me life has been one big pain in the butt at times, do I look happy, am I really happy, just what the hell is happiness, maybe making it through the pain, who the heck knows, but we better know after a certain age or someone will know for us, love&peace2u|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|So much serene beauty riding a gentle breeze...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|simply beautiful..I felt like I just wittnessed a birh, acutally I just did :)|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|I love the haunting music to go along with this outstanding writing.
GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Truly magical but with just a hint of sadness...nicely done.
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|Marvelous extension of a metaphor. I especially like the 3-2-3 form.|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Such an extremely potent metaphor, Belle! It's strong writing like this that makes me proud to be in this very rewarding life of poetry...no one can write these words like you can, expelling placenta, cutting the umbilical cord and cradling the conception reborn of nurture and cradling embrace...metaphysical supremecy!
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|The metaphor of birth for a poem is wonderful! This is a very good write!
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Belle, a sweet and delicate composition, pure and simple.
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|You find such perfect pictures, and paint them inside us with your words.
Beautiful- magical, you.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|ancient words of new wisdom live, breathe
as i am born to become a living poem
A lovely poem, indeed!
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I see this is from the archives of Belle, but as always you write superior poetry. You do have the gift of a poetess!
I loved this poem, and the music is awesome!
Much peace, love and light,