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| Reviewed by Victor Jensen |
10/3/2002 |
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| Love the rhyme scheme. As for the content you sure don't need any bad luck, you are accident prone, hope it's temporary. Good luck on your date, if you make it. Thanks for another good poem. Vic |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
9/25/2002 |
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Just had to come back and read this.... it's hilarious..I've missed reading your work...
Jenni |
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| Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader) |
9/25/2002 |
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| You are a riot with this theme! **Mari** |
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| Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader) |
9/24/2002 |
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| Too good - this is a scream!!! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/24/2002 |
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| {{{{{gumby}}}}} you have all the (rotten) luck! i'm hoping things get better...i've had luck like that, too...i got married on crutches...(((HUGS))) and here's a whole bunch of lucky wishes for you!! love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/24/2002 |
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| so funny, but i am sorry you hurt yourself. please be careful okay?? love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
9/24/2002 |
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Aww Gumby , everything will
be allright ~
Neptune will love you
on first sight.
She won't look at the
crutches , my dear~
She'll be too busy
holdin you near.
So don't worry about
your date ~
Just knock on her door..
and don't be late!
I couldnt resist this little poem.
Have fun Gumby! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
9/24/2002 |
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Even banged up
And stung by a bee
You'll still look good
To Neptune and me! |
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| Reviewed by Margie Hess |
9/24/2002 |
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| this reminds me of a prom date i once heard about. i'm so glad you are having fun gumby dear |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
9/24/2002 |
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poor Gumby you have
really had a spell
with bad fortune...
I hope Neptune
doesn't run away
either...
Take care.
Peg |
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