|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|Good one. Too true. Great rhyme scheme.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I always appreciate your wit and humor, Patrick. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|You can put your trademark on that. Funny, but so sadly true. When we are going down, will we take our designer duds with us?
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Very deep! And very whimsical at the same time. I love it.
|Reviewed by Debra Baker
|Absolutely loved this poem Patrick...kinda had a tickle to it...and very rythmic characteristic....|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Well said, Patrick!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Deep and very wise, Patrick. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Think we are all sinking fast so keep a life jacket and a pair of oars close by and maybe a easy to assemble tent just in case...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|This my dear Patrick, should be read from first grade till last, that duck that now sits in the black muck, would appreciate your sentiments. Bless Ya! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Maybe you but NOT I...e|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Wow! What a round-about, though clever way to make an environmental statement.
Your So. Cal. Pal, Mark
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Confession is good for the soul. Karma is a good indicator of absolvement to he who speaks up followed by putting repentance into motion. Good poetry with moral nutrition and all that jazz without preaching wrongdoing...well received, Patrick.
|Reviewed by Donna Chandler
|Well said and you couldn't be more correct.
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Same boat, sinking fast.|