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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
6/11/2010 |
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| Good one. Too true. Great rhyme scheme. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/8/2010 |
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I always appreciate your wit and humor, Patrick. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/5/2010 |
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You can put your trademark on that. Funny, but so sadly true. When we are going down, will we take our designer duds with us?
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
6/4/2010 |
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Very deep! And very whimsical at the same time. I love it.
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Debra Baker |
6/4/2010 |
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| Absolutely loved this poem Patrick...kinda had a tickle to it...and very rythmic characteristic.... |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/4/2010 |
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Well said, Patrick!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/4/2010 |
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| Deep and very wise, Patrick. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/3/2010 |
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Think we are all sinking fast so keep a life jacket and a pair of oars close by and maybe a easy to assemble tent just in case...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
6/3/2010 |
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| This my dear Patrick, should be read from first grade till last, that duck that now sits in the black muck, would appreciate your sentiments. Bless Ya! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/3/2010 |
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| Maybe you but NOT I...e |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
6/3/2010 |
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Wow! What a round-about, though clever way to make an environmental statement.
Your So. Cal. Pal, Mark |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
6/3/2010 |
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Confession is good for the soul. Karma is a good indicator of absolvement to he who speaks up followed by putting repentance into motion. Good poetry with moral nutrition and all that jazz without preaching wrongdoing...well received, Patrick.
Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Donna Chandler |
6/3/2010 |
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Well said and you couldn't be more correct.
Donna |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
6/3/2010 |
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| Same boat, sinking fast. |
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