by Krittika Srikanth
Tuesday, September 24, 2002
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When his smile brings a smile on your face,
When all you could do is into his eyes just gaze,
When his very sight sets your heart ablaze,
When to talk to him you look for differnt ways!
When to impress him you dress to kill,
When to watch his game you stay out late against your folks will,
When he walks past,the world around stands still
When to hear his voice you hike up your phone bill!
When you have a little secret to share,
With your best friend who has always been there,
When you do nothing but into the star studded sky stare,
When you feel like giving tight hugs to your teddy bear!
When your feelings are all mush,
When you liking him is supposedly a big hush,
When you really want it,but dont wanna rush,
Hey relax,you've just got a huge crush!!!!!!
All you young ones in love out there....chill out!
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|Reviewed by Debbie Edmiaston
|I'm sure this brings back memories to every one of us....
Great job, Krittika!
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|You are doing great Kiddo and don't you worry none. This is a great place with lots of sweet angels, men and women and you will love it here.
Both writing and reading. This one is wonderful and hard to believe you are only 18 :) :) :)
Love from Coimbatore - Joel -
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Tender! Sweet! A great job of expression!! Makes me remember those innocent days of yesteryears!|
|Reviewed by Larry Skahill
|what a lovely feeling
but be careful there is a reason its called a ~crush~
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Mush and crush,, this was so good...|