|Reviewed by m w
|The heart knows no time when love lives within|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Such a contrast between the interminable "waiting" for the sudden appearance or interjection of what is hoped for or expected, and the perpetual ocean of tears and pain keeping her on the edge. You capture a state of counterpoised limbo that inhabits many of our lives in some shape or form, Tinka, but, even with numb feet and dead legs, we seem to manage to hang on. Very powerful writing. Glad to see you back on the move in the Den again! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|I can truly feel the sadness in 'waiting.' It is a hard place to be ... wondering, wondering, waiting, waiting.
God bless you,
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A very heart-tugging write Tinks...beautifully written. Glad to see you back, you have been missed.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Painful write, Tinka; but so beautifully penned! Well done, m'dear!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Waiting....at times so difficult....beautifully written, Tinka....so nice to read your work again.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|The sense of dispair and heartache as one continues to wait...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|wonderful sense of emotion and depth of feeling!|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|well Tinks at least numb feet won't feel pain, good one. cheers|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Don't let her step off that edge...e|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|As always Brown eyes, a well crafted piece of poetry. It is sad but you expertly created it to be so.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|This casts a dark shadow.|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Tinka, I sense tragedy in the wings here. "on the edge she stands -- emptiness deep inside - an ocean of pain without end". Powerful lines harboring such grief and desperation. This is a moving work Tinka. May peace and love be always with you my friend. Jon Michael
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very nice, Tinka.|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|enjoyed the read!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sometimes the waiting seems interminable and very painful. A moving and meaningful write, TinkaSweets. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Good to read you again Tink......
Missed tour writing
been gone for a spell
back for while
Love & Peace be with you