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Shattered Pieces by D. L. Vaineo Saturday, June 12, 2010 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan A bad break-up.

It was heading this way For many months I just did not want To believe Our relationship was good In the beginning Like all relationships are Loving each other regularly We lived together Which was good and bad I needed my own Space at times She decided she needed More than space She found another Lover to take my place

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Reviewed by Dawn Anderson	6/13/2010

Heartbreak....how well you've expressed it in such excellent poetic form.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	6/13/2010

It is never easy when love comes to a crashing unexpected end...but then again is love ever easy? fee




Reviewed by Christine Volkoff	6/12/2010

A terse, merciless, crisp rendition of heartbreak...simple, cruel, shattering. Well done!




Reviewed by Christine Tsen	6/12/2010

Really nice poetic flow, so sad but well written! Blessings, Christine