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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
10/3/2010 |
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A powerful poem, William. It's as if you were speaking from your own deathbed--an admirable feat of empathy for an author.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Johanna Fields |
6/25/2010 |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
6/24/2010 |
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it is a very sorrowing feeling to know of someone dying alone
I most recently was apart of a passing as I held her hand
and she told me she will be coming to see me in a few days...
Spiritual Beauty is what it is
With Love's Bounty & Inspiration
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/19/2010 |
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....GRAVE WHERE IS THY VICTORY? OH DEATH...WHERE IS THEY STING?... THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS SIMPLY FANTASTIC...A VIVID IMAGERY OF HOW ONE COULD LOOK AT DEATH...AND THE PICTURE GOES ALONG PERFECTLY WITH THIS WELL DONE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/17/2010 |
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Gorgeous poetry, William!!!! We all make that final journey alone, life is a great mystery, and so is death....
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
6/15/2010 |
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William this here is a masterpiece
So beautifully writing a
Your words so sad yet so tender and loving!
Brilliant write William
Wishing you Love Peace and Light...Yolie |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/15/2010 |
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| Ultimately we all die alone, but an eternal heartache is the cruelest fate. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
6/15/2010 |
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| Wm. this one brought tears. So beautifully sad and honestly penned. |
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| Reviewed by Tajwer khan |
6/14/2010 |
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nice
i loved the topic and the thoughts concealed behind your character
God bless you
TJ |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
6/14/2010 |
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Such overwhelming sadness - you wrote this is if you had experienced it first-hand. Yet, even with the sadness there is an ever greater intensity - to have known LOVE. Your words take mine away.
God bless you,
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/14/2010 |
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| Very sad,and I see this every day of my life...nice to read you again dear man..sure have missed you ..hope all is well with you..take care always OK..Hugsss...much love to you |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/14/2010 |
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And as the rose died, the last exhaling was filled with the intoxicating essence from heart's innermost.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/14/2010 |
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| ROMANTIC AND BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/13/2010 |
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| This pulls at the heart, William. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/13/2010 |
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| It almost sounds like a romantic write, though I know not why I think that, just that it seems that way to me...e |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/13/2010 |
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William, the object of your desire is indeed fortunate to have this poem in honor of her...I am always amazed at the depth of your passion.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/13/2010 |
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You have taken the sad words and written a very touching poem William. Another great write.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/13/2010 |
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Ah, this one tears at the heart ... powerfully emotive, William. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/13/2010 |
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What a beautifully written poem, so full of deep emotion and grief.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/13/2010 |
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Such bittersweet emotions..your poem is beautifully sad.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/13/2010 |
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| wonderfully written though feels desolate |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/13/2010 |
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This feels romantic in nature, William, as though death may be the biggest romance yet to come for us? Different, but good different. You just added to my perspective. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
6/13/2010 |
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You created another masterpiece, William. Wonderfully written.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/13/2010 |
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I think of this as dying in love...well done
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
6/13/2010 |
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oh my! In a strange way this is a love poem that strikes the heart...but in another strange way, your thoughts take you - and your reader - to a lonely place of wistful sorrow. As a poem, this is highly effective, but my dear d'Artagnan: scold your mind and put your thoughts on a track to better places, would you?
love,
gina |
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