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  Dying Alone
by William Bonilla
Sunday, June 13, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.

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 Dying Alone

~*~
My feelings disappeared
Like tear drops in the rain
My heart aches eternally
From the pierced arrows
Of Cupid’s Bow.
My eyes glazed, close
My Lord above calls
With your image in mind
Your lips I shall not taste
For mine can only sigh
The loveliness of your name.
You’re absent from my side
As I exhale
My final breath
He who is near, is called 
Death.


By: William Bonilla
06/13/06
“D’Artagnan”
 



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Reviewed by Connie Faust 10/3/2010
A powerful poem, William. It's as if you were speaking from your own deathbed--an admirable feat of empathy for an author.
Connie
Reviewed by Johanna Fields 6/25/2010
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 6/24/2010
it is a very sorrowing feeling to know of someone dying alone
I most recently was apart of a passing as I held her hand
and she told me she will be coming to see me in a few days...
Spiritual Beauty is what it is
With Love's Bounty & Inspiration
Vickie
Reviewed by JMS Bell 6/19/2010
....GRAVE WHERE IS THY VICTORY? OH DEATH...WHERE IS THEY STING?... THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS SIMPLY FANTASTIC...A VIVID IMAGERY OF HOW ONE COULD LOOK AT DEATH...AND THE PICTURE GOES ALONG PERFECTLY WITH THIS WELL DONE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 6/17/2010
Gorgeous poetry, William!!!! We all make that final journey alone, life is a great mystery, and so is death....

Anna
Reviewed by Morning Star 6/15/2010
William this here is a masterpiece
So beautifully writing a
Your words so sad yet so tender and loving!
Brilliant write William
Wishing you Love Peace and Light...Yolie
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 6/15/2010
Ultimately we all die alone, but an eternal heartache is the cruelest fate. Patrick
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 6/15/2010
Wm. this one brought tears. So beautifully sad and honestly penned.
Reviewed by TeeJay khan 6/14/2010
nice
i loved the topic and the thoughts concealed behind your character
God bless you
TJ
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 6/14/2010
Such overwhelming sadness - you wrote this is if you had experienced it first-hand. Yet, even with the sadness there is an ever greater intensity - to have known LOVE. Your words take mine away.

God bless you,
Kathy
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 6/14/2010
Very sad,and I see this every day of my life...nice to read you again dear man..sure have missed you ..hope all is well with you..take care always OK..Hugsss...much love to you
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/14/2010
And as the rose died, the last exhaling was filled with the intoxicating essence from heart's innermost.

Georg

Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/14/2010
ROMANTIC AND BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 6/13/2010
This pulls at the heart, William.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/13/2010
It almost sounds like a romantic write, though I know not why I think that, just that it seems that way to me...e
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/13/2010
William, the object of your desire is indeed fortunate to have this poem in honor of her...I am always amazed at the depth of your passion.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 6/13/2010
You have taken the sad words and written a very touching poem William. Another great write.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/13/2010
Ah, this one tears at the heart ... powerfully emotive, William. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 6/13/2010
What a beautifully written poem, so full of deep emotion and grief.
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 6/13/2010
Such bittersweet emotions..your poem is beautifully sad.
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/13/2010
wonderfully written though feels desolate
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/13/2010
This feels romantic in nature, William, as though death may be the biggest romance yet to come for us? Different, but good different. You just added to my perspective. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 6/13/2010
You created another masterpiece, William. Wonderfully written.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by D Johnson 6/13/2010
I think of this as dying in love...well done

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 6/13/2010
oh my! In a strange way this is a love poem that strikes the heart...but in another strange way, your thoughts take you - and your reader - to a lonely place of wistful sorrow. As a poem, this is highly effective, but my dear d'Artagnan: scold your mind and put your thoughts on a track to better places, would you?

love,
gina

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