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  Fun in the Gutter
by Patrick A Granfors
Wednesday, June 16, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Even while on vacation in the woods maintenance things have to be done.

To the show tune "Up on the Roof"

Photo:Mount Coolwater


This morning I climbed the ladder of doom

A fine warm calm June day

To clean the gutters of compost and things

What’s there I cannot say

 

Oh, on the roof the woods left big messes for free

Hopefully they won’t have to medivac me

No, No

 

The shingles are slippery and the angle is steep

This crap is just like glue

The water pressure’s low and it splashes my face

Now my hand’s stuck in this goo

 

Oh, on the roof the woods left big messes for free

Hopefully they won’t have to medivac me

No, No

 

Now the trowel is stuck and the nails have come loose

The gutter is hanging low

It’s near the peak of the roof and it’s so damned high

I’m losing my grip now so

 

Oh, on the roof the woods left big messes for free

Hopefully they won’t have to medivac me

No, No

 

I should have hired Bubba this is gonna end bad

The glide path’s very steep

If I survive I’ll never do this again

If I don’t I’ll be six feet deep

 

Oh, on the roof the woods left big messes for free

Hopefully they won’t have to medivac me

No, No

 

I just lucked out and landed right in the bush

I’m done with leaves today

I’m considering Bubba but his price is so high

I’ll save this problem for another day

 

Oh, on the roof the woods left big messes for free

I'm glad they didn't have to medivac me

No, No…Up on the roof…..Up on the roof… Up on the roof

 

 

Copyright 2010 Patrick A Granfors

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
When young, thoughts turn to love; when old, to labor.

Glad you lucked out to write another day.

Ron
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Every "do it yourself" own a ladder of doom, the smarter thing is to let Bubba to go up and break something...keeping you away from that six foot under!

Georg

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Should have slept in . . .the heat stroke is not a good thing.
Reviewed by Richard King
What the hell were you thinking? Bubba on the roof and you in the chaise lounge, beer in hand, just sounds so much more sensible to me. Old bones break real easy.

Dick.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
The Ladder of Doom - the mind boggles here with the dangers of you, a ladder, and more insects. Be very careful, up there. And watch out for Roof Racoons and Rowdy Raptors, too.
Reviewed by Paul Berube
The pains of home ownership, Patrick. Nicely told.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
That's an exquisite ballad Patrick. I'm getting into your poetry.
Namaste
Christine
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Yeah, gutters aren't as fun as they used to be! More often than not tho, that's where my mind is.

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Oh stop whinin', as its your house you are the one that NEEDS to clean them gutters, not Bubba...save him for real emergencies like when the sewer clogs up...LOL, Ed
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Maybe you should drink a beer and then go up to the roof and, well no, on second thought, don't do that! Don't touch the beer and go on that roof, you hear me!!!
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Ain't no fun on a roof, my friend. I've been there thousands of times and so well know that going up is so much eaiser than coming down, not too fast, though. Though still in the "going on roof business", I just do not do it anymore and neither should you... EVER!!!
Your friend, Mark
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
You have your mind in the gutter and on the gutter, but you said it well without a stutter, ha good one Patrick! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
This is one fine capture of the song and you the deft poetic songbird that sings it with such gay abandon! Can relate to this one big time, Patrick, as our house is sorrounded by stunning oaks and Scots pine - double trouble whatever time of year it is and constant hard work... they make us surely pay for their gratuitous beauties! xx
Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo
Patrick: With a home in the Shanandoah Mountains - we too have our gutter issues. As a matter of fact - we just hired someone to clean ours. Every Spring its the gutters and every Fall its the leaves. It's worth every penny to pay "Bubba." I enjoyed your sense of humor. Great poem.

Deborah
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Summer version of Chevy Chase's Christmas Vacation! Put the safety lock on the staple gun! A ride in an air ambulance is $35,000 - great to have home owners insurance with a life dormer deductible...Fun in the Gutter is worth its premium, Patrick...

Love,
Sage
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