|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Heart pounding poetry DJ.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sensual and well written ....|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|ROMANTIC AND BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|How you make the transition from 'his' in the first stanza to 'my' in the second is a masterful way to raise the intensity, and then to sustain it right to the end. As Amber and Sage have said, master of passion and true erotica.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|exploring & dancing tongues
pinching & love bites too...
Brought With Intimate Passions
Desirous Bounties Are Erotic Fires
Burning From Within Your Soul Don Juan
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Hot! Black Velvet puts the pinch on my own nipples, DJ...Sensuality at its best...the red in the thermometer disappeared completely off the charts with Black Velvet Shame...true erotica!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A poem to embrace that will leave all women breathless I'm sure ~
Experiencing breathlessness first hand at the moment!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this erotic and passionate offering, DJ. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|So DJ, Why not visit paradise? You only live once, don't you, forget everything and go for it..It is only a breath away to lasting pleasure beyond compare...
Your poetry lifts me up to passionate heights that only a talented lover as you can lift one.
Another erotic passionate poem from the master of passion.
Much peace, love and light,