|Reviewed by stan nassano
|wow,stuck in the past, you nailed this one,I like how you kept the form with out loosing the power of the poem,sounds heartfelt if so,hope someday you leave the past behind,but thanks for sharing|
|Reviewed by David Maclellan
|John, this is truly a work of raw emotion that must have taken courage (and a bit of reflective pain) to pen. Chin up buddy, a great write and a sad, emotive read.
Best regards, David
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Painful, honest, and truly John, you share a universal and timeless theme of this world/life via your verses here. Thank you, friend. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|John it's so painful to read but so honest and real. Beautifully, powerfully penned, deeply felt.|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|A fine achievement in verse, John|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Sad, intense, powerful....and well done.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The amazing thing about this poem is the ability of the writer to still be able to look back with kindness if not complete understanding.
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|one does well without interventions of witches brew...you'll see
beautiful sad words...patmedlin
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is such an intensely beautiful poem.
It sounds as if the journey has been thousands of miles, keep urging your horse forward ~
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|Your poem is filled with heartbreak and it brought tears to my eyes. Amidst the heartbreak this reader sees a small ray of hope still remaining. There are times when life really stings and the pain is intense. I applaud you John.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Powerfully penned, John, one feels the sadness in these lines. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo
|John: A very intense poem about Love. Don't ever give up hope, my friend that one day the woman of your dreams is out there waiting for you to find her.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Wow! Very sad tale unfolded in such a striking way....well done, John. I truy enjoyed reading your poem.