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The Smell of Thunder
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, June 21, 2010
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Know what I miss?  The smell
of thunder, the air right before
a storm.  It's pregnant with

ozone, ready to give birth at the
first crack!  of lightning, the
sky purpled and still.  I inhale

the cloud's labor, feel it deep
in my back, looking forward to
the relief that will come in rain.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (6/21)



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Reviewed by Sheila Roy
I'm with you, even the back thing. Nice descriptions in this. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Unmistakable odor, that and the smell of earthworms on the asphalt. Patrick
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
The smell of thunder - truly a powerful thing; we're being pounded with wave after wave of thunderstorms this week.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Eating bean stew again?

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Well captured atmosphere, Karla
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
I remember that smell so well when I loved in Ct....beautiful write, Karla.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
This is beautiful Karla
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Dan's right, this has a magical quality...your relationship with the sky is rich and deep.
I love this, Karla.

John
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
That isn't the smell of thunder,its your own feet, maybe a bath might be a good idea...;-) LOL, [running far away & fast] ed
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
wow Karla,,that is just about to happen right now here~great poem!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
i love that smell!! very well described!
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Loved this- another one of nature's gifts.
Thanks for sharing.

John
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
I miss that too. Used to love the summers in the Northeast where I grew up. Now I'm in LA. No thunderstorms here unless you go to the desert.
Reviewed by Cryssa C
I thought of you yesterday as we watched our very own twister form and come down less than two miles away. We lived in Missouri for 4 years and never saw a twister... we had to move to Montana for that, I guess. :~) We had hail the size of bouncy balls and golf balls as well. It made for quite the memorable Father's Day!
Hope you and Karen are doing well.
Cryssa :~)
Reviewed by Sophia Choudhury
i can completely identify with the feeling!lovely poem Karla.
regards
sophia
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
I don't miss it, but I'd rather have some rain; it would certainly cool things off! *HOT!* Well done, Karla; enjoyed this one!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Nicely done, Karla.
Reviewed by D Johnson
Karla, you do magic with storms...well done.

Cheers,
Dan
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