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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/28/2010 |
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a beautiful write Dawn
love the angel in the sky
clouds bring lots of messages in images
love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
6/27/2010 |
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| The wrap-rounds work so perfectly. Such a great message to enjoy the gift of every second of life. Spec' at dawn. Or is that with Dawn. :) (-.-) Beautiful poetry and quote. xx |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/27/2010 |
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Gives me pause. Makes me want to slow down and enjoy the moment more. Nicely penned.
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
6/26/2010 |
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A lovely message Dawn, at the heart of a moment in time.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/26/2010 |
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how would she know, unless she took notice?
We are so busy with "living" that we forget to notice the important things in life. Thank you for sharing, Dawn. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/25/2010 |
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THE CALM AND SERENE ESSENCE OF THIS WORK...REACHES OUT AND 'ANOINTS' THE READER WITH...'HIS' PEACE. A DYNAMIC SHARING...SO INSPIRING AND, FOR ME, TIMELY. THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS, DAWN. 'DAWN'...IT IS NOT BY PURE CHANCE THAT YOU ARE NAMED SO. LOVE TO YOU AND YOURS...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/24/2010 |
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| This has such a snapshot feeling to it, as if we've walked in on some private scene, and that honesty combined with an ethereal quality make for a delightful poem. Hope you are well, Dawn xxx :) Blessings, Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe |
6/23/2010 |
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| Beautiful and very inspirational. I'm definetely a morning person, so I can live by this. :) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/22/2010 |
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the gust of twilight dreams does indeed harness the cloak of the waking world ...
eloquently expressed ... |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/22/2010 |
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This poem has a gossamer atmosphere, Dawn, delicate on the senses and threaded with the finest feelings.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/22/2010 |
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A work of inspirational beauty as seen through your eyes. God bless...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/22/2010 |
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| You've captured a little bit of heaven in your observations. There is beauty all around us to see when we really stop and look. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
6/22/2010 |
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| Capturing the moment of now and savoring it completely...Fabulous! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
6/22/2010 |
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| Lovely! We must appreciate the beauty that surrounds us ... we must take the time. I like your tracing of butterfly wings. Beautiful images, Dawn. ~Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
6/22/2010 |
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This is so true. I love watching the dawn creep in on angels' wings...setting the sky aglow with a palette of soft pastels. I think that because fewer people see the sunrise's they are made special for those who gaze upon them.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
6/22/2010 |
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| I see an angel in the sky. gorgeous. And she came to greet an equally gorgeous girl as she awoke from her slumber. You are so beautiful and you can't help but share it with those of us who are awake and who look for it in you. Many blessings, J'nia <> < |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/22/2010 |
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| ..funny, Camryn my 2 year old Grandaughter called me on the cell phone,(riding w her Mom)"Gramma, I see a lion and baby ones, they all love each other" ...the magic of clouds...love this Dawn~ |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
6/22/2010 |
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Dawn,
Nothing so beautiful as a morning sunrise. Who wouldn't want to get up upon seeing such beauty?
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/22/2010 |
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| ah, i love the mornings, beautiful write! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/22/2010 |
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I don't want...but my body told me otherwise and ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Georg
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/22/2010 |
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| I didn't and I'm going for a walk and enjoy God's beauty. |
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| Reviewed by David Maclellan |
6/22/2010 |
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| Beautiful nature entwined with childhood memories...does it get any better? A lovely poem dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/22/2010 |
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Beautiful, silken poem ~ I truly love the ending and message.
"The breeze at dawn..." is one of the poems I say to myself each morning at breakfast. Another of my favorites each morning is "Don't sit with indifferent people..." I love Rumi quotes to help get the day off to a daring start!
You are a poet I will read often.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/22/2010 |
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"The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you"
As a very early riser, I believe that's true. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/22/2010 |
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Dawn, Yesterday of course you know, was the Summer solstice...I am always affected by nature..This morning, after a restless night, I woke up at exactly "dawn"...I never get up this early, I write late at night when my muses are alive and kickin..I got up went to the bathroom, and decided to stay up. As Rumi says, don't go back to sleep, such wise words, I am so grateful to have been able to welcome this day in at that early hour..You are right, there are secrets in the breeze at dawn... Lovely write for me to read on this special morning in Connecticut...I love your writing and it always speaks to me with "your secrets", my friend...
Peace, love and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/22/2010 |
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| BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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