|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|This happens to us all at times dear sister. My therapist asked me what do I do when I start becoming depressed. I told her that I have friends online that I can turn to if I need to talk, or just comment on something they wrote. I told her that I write, and I write poetry and prose. She told me that is the best medicine of all.
We as women are emotional creatures, and sometimes we lose control of those emotions, only to cool down a few moments later and ask ourselves why the heck was I upset, or why the heck did I just eat that big slice of choclate cake. LOL. But after our rant is over, we just don't remember what caused our emotions to go awry. Thank you for sharing sis, and I can relate.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister Barbie
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A lot of deep emotional feelings in this write, Tinks...
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Between the picture and your words - you brought a smile to my lips as I recognize myself.
God bless you,
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|very human write Tink, we all lose it in one way or another sooner or later, hey that cake can make anyone lose it, in fact the other day my wife and I went a couple of rounds over some chocolate and lemon loaf cake. She grabbed a few slices at a funeral dinner we attended, guess what I ate them later and got chewed out when she couldn't find them, anyway I went out and bought me a whole lemon loaf cake and ate the heck out of it during the course of the day, cheers|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Wow!! Very intense, Tinka! Nothing like some raw emotion to catch the reader.|
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|I know of what you write! I can feel deep emotion in this piece.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Brownies have that effect in me too! (LOL)
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|AH, for the love of chocolate.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Very different, Tinka.good to read your work again!|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|This poem is so rich in meaning, but thankfully offers a brighter view.
Oh the power of chocolate.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Good to see ya writing, young lady...e|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Different and unique.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Cute Tinka and very well written...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Jason Wise
|carefully chosen and very well placed words,|
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Tinka, I feel sorry that the cold made you lose your deep feelings, I am sending you the warmth from my heart, which nothing can cool. Love Emile|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|tough reality-really well expressed|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Mysterious poetic words ~ but if the picture tells all, chocolate is always worth the dive!
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Lovely and intriguing Tinky.
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|I'm assuming the cake won Tinks? LOL!! I love how you combined what sounds like an angst filled love poem with a photo of a woman going bonkers with a slice of cake! Great! Love, Michelle|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Hey I like what Regis just called you. Tinka sweets is good but I think I will still call you beautiful brown eyes.:)
Now about your outstanding poem, I do not know who has riled you but I would love to punch his lights out!
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I have read your verses several times and each time, I am given to pause for reflection; thank you, TinkaSweets. Love and best wishes,