|Reviewed by Jeff Neuman-Lee (Reader)
|I liked it. Sort of like lyrics to a song, man.|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|The weather is here, wish you were beautiful. Take that Paris! Patrick|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|did you go down-town Dayvid
since the internet was down
how low can we go (that dance)...lower that pole usher!
stretchin back arms balance out...walkin & shakin & groovin
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|The internet=The Electronic Umbilical cord. A bummer when it snaps. J'nia|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|interesting-and a statememnt on how the interenet is relied on|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Thanks for the smiling this morning, Dayvid.|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Neil Diamond said "Thank the Lord for the nighttime, forget the day." ... could be a revival going on here with Jan and Dean and the Beach Boys and Paris Hilton's bikini line...does she wax, dude! Surfin' Safari Internet never went down so good!
Love and Sea Spume,
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|nice write....about someone with serious problems...way beyond the internet being down|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Hilarious Dayvid, leavened with plenty of yearning and humor!
|Reviewed by Jason Wise
|It seems like you've taken a moment or a feeling and conveyed that well with your words.|