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Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin

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My beautiful Sienna



Have her sleep outside

once the weather permits,

though she always preferred

to be outside the bedroom door,

stifling.

 

 

julianza, Inkling

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Reviewed by Michelle Mead
:( How sad and beautiful and relatable all at one time-what a beauty.
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
What a beauty. Sad for your great loss. J'nia
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
I agree with Peter. This is good poetry. Succinctly written.

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
You write what you need to write. We read what we need to read. There's no blame or self-pity here. That's where you were today and that's all that matters. As long as it's emotionally true, it's perfect. Period!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Awwww, she is such a beautiful girl, sorry for your loss, but as time passes by, maybe you will find another young lady to adopt...ed
Reviewed by Carin Spirit
The unconditional love is so difficult to lose. Sienna is a beautiful gentle soul, I am truly sorry for your loss. Be as Gentle with yourself as she would be. Carin' Spirit
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
I am sorry for your loss, Juli. I offer you my sincere sympathy. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Jael Fields (Reader)
Of all of the poetic thoughts that could have been expressed about this loving and devoted animal, I have to be honest and say that the title sucks. the poem is is nothingbut an unjustified attempt to wallow in blame and guilt over something that you could not control. You write some great poetry, Julie, but this does not even deserve to share the same sight with your other works.
The most that I can say about this is that I am sorry for your loss of Sienna.
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